Ruby made the Cresent Rose herself and went a little overboard when designing it

I love it

LOVING THIS STORY! GOING TO CRY CAHSE IT'S SOOOO GOOD! OMG YOU COULD BE A PRO! OTP! PLSSS UPDATE CAUSE THIS STORY GIVES ME LIFE! CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT THIS STORY! ️️️️

First - I apologize for the REALLY DELAYED review. Changing jobs is never easy...
Anyways, I was informed of the Lord Monty's color-based naming convention, and while I agree it's hard to re-do everything from scratch (I very nearly did that myself), it's also cool to have such a rule... Forces you to think really hard.
On to the chapter - while I kinda got miffed that Ben's team is partnered with SQRL (for some reason I am reminded of Makoto Nanaya, NOL Intelligence Dept.), I can't help but feel there's something to them... Like there's more than meets the eye.
Oh well, gotta wait til the next chapter to find out more!
- Sanguis

Bloody brilliant chapter only suggestion is a little more romantic progression

i kinda want more romance progress like at least a hug or kiss in the next two chapters

i like it so try to update often

Glad to see one punny statement at last. Also you didn't have to do a shoutout, but thanks anyways.

It's your call whether you want to focus on Ben first, or his overall team relationship first.

It's also fine if you take your time, rushed pieces usually turn out bad...

So far, things are looking good. Waiting for the next chapter.

Sanguis out for now.

updaate ya old fart

I'm interested in how this will play out

OHMEGOSHZ! GUESS WHO? IT'S YOUR BESTIE! JUST JOKING WE'RE "Just friends." BIEEPIE!

Nice job! I don't think it captures the essence of all the characters though...

There's one thing missing from Yang though.

The puns. The puns, you're missing Yang's trademark puns. Yang will be SO hurt if this keeps up...