Oh my.

I know you should be busy with so many more stories when you have time to update this story here please and also update Everland when you have time and course but continue!

I know you're not done, but I didn't like this one as much. I skimmed through a lot of it, and it didn't really hold my attention. However, the chapter of Peter agonizing over his feelings was beautifully written.

OH MY GOD PLEASE UPDATE THIS PLEASE! IT'S so close to the climax i could feel it please update this is soo good! i love brine! someone who is so willing to give up so much for wendy doesn't deserve his curse! and i swear if marrow is some kind of consilation for brine i will lose it... I mean that chapter painting peters feelings were fenominal and i felt for him so much, but still weighing the pros and cons, Brine is still the person who is so self aware and loyal and amazing... ugh. I'm planing on making a fanart of this soon if you don't mind :) anyway... please update ;-;

Can u please please pleeeeease update this story? It's truly one of my favourites, the plot is so riveting and it's easy to get into the story! Plus, Wendy and Peter all the way, but I love the other characters too, like Brine and Conch and Black Antler, so please continue the story!

Come on! Never let a story this amazing die! I'm not above begging for it! *falls at your feet*

Side note...
I've never thought I would want Wendy to be with anyone other than Peter, but Brine is seriously tugging at my heart. (Plot twist...she ends up with Conch!)

Every time I decide I like one of them more, the other does something to take back the lead.

amazing story, keep it up! thank you so much for this sequel, I love it very much :-)
I came here (since green & blue) for a PeterxWendy story, but I adore Brine!

Things are getting so intense!

Peter's constant mood swings was annoying to me, but after reading this I finally understand. Here I am, thinking like an adult, wishing Peter would grow up. But the truth is that Peter is still a child, and for some reason, that didn't really hit me as soon as it should have. (Yes, I knew he was young, but my mind was acting like a silly adult and imagining that he should be more mature since this is a romance.) And as a child, Peter has never experienced these new feelings of such strong affection and, therefore, is lashing out because HE does not understand. Gah! Why can't I be a child again... everything is a lot less complicated as a kid. :/
(As always, beautiful writing!)

Sighs... I love Brine.

A really amazing story. I hope you can update soon! Everyone will be looking forward to it.
And...is it weird to start shipping Wendy with Brine? I came to this story looking for stories of Peter and Wendy (all the while thinking, "I don't want these kinds stories, they're just pushing themselves onto Peter! I want PeterxWendy fluff! Rawr!") but the more I read the first story, the more I fell in love with Brine with Wendy. Hahaha, maybe it's because you're such an amazing writer. Cheers for you~

Please please please please update!
This story is so good I just cant even...
Please!

~Fi

In a clinic? Well, I hope you get better :)

Oh, darn you, Captain Hook! Darn you, Bluebeard! Darn you, Sea Witch! You dreadful creatures!

You'll all lose in the end, anyway! XC

Great chappie, by the way! Keep up the great work! :D

But who's the mer-traitor!? I know it was someone preswnt when they discussed Tinkerbell, or maybe it was an eavesdropper? Ah, I'm terrible at mystery x'D

Great chapter, though! Cx Can't wait for the next update! ~

But who is it! Who is that mer-traitor? Ugh, I want to know so bad!

Wonderful, sad, chapter by the way. Like alway, keep up the great writing!