This is an absolutely amazing piece of writing! I honestly cried a lot lol, but I just have to say that this is spectacular! keep 9u the good work!d

Absolutely beautiful story cried about a couple times through out this chapter will definitely read this over and over countless times.

look I just wanna be honest and say how cute this story is! x3

Ahhh this is amazing I love it! But you never did clear up why Stoick was so against Hiccup dating Jack

I think you got Alvin and Dagur down really well!

I am crying this is so sad and beautiful.

*high pitch screaming*

Pain, without love. Pain cant get enough. This chapter is slowly killing meeee.

On your note, I do

lol They're kinda breaking the fourth wall. I love it.

This review will contain spoilers.

A well written story that's worth reading, but I liked it better in the beginning.

I do not understand why Hiccup and Jack didn't go to the police about Pitch, why they didn't even seem to think about it. That's so wrong and sends the signal that rape is to be accepted, that the victim can do nothing about it. They even seemed to blame themselves more than Pitch!

Secondly, when Hiccup and Jack got together sexually and Hiccup was unsure and remembering the rape, I neither understand nor like that Jack never volunteered to bottom.

So, the story is good, it has a good flow, but it won't make it to my favourites list.

What a twist! Here I thought hiccup had died. That's all I'm going to say. I'm really happy but also really sad.

I like how you described Toothless.

So freak beautiful.
Thanks for sharing

good story