Reviews for A Gift for You, My Commander
Guest chapter 50 . 12/25/2019
man i really wish there was an update to this story...
Black Magic99 chapter 50 . 6/20/2019
a nice, super happy, slice of mass effect life story
Black Magic99 chapter 46 . 6/20/2019
oof i get that isis is a legit name but modern day timing
kmacarthur2104 chapter 50 . 4/30/2019
Really beautiful hope you are doing more chapters for this book please let me know thank you
ThePotatoKing-Queen chapter 35 . 2/6/2019
Ok I know this is very irrelevant to story (which by the way, it’s a great story) but if the domestic cuteness and fluff gives us diabetes because it’s sweet, wouldn’t the vegetables be the angsty/depressing stuff? Are you telling us to read angst?
(Jk i know what you meant but I’m tired and thats what popped into my mind when I read your Authors note, just though I’d let you know)
The Accident Experiment chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
Going back thru mass effect stories, realized i never finished this story. Gonna make sure to finish it now!
goddragonking chapter 50 . 7/27/2018
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
roguishpixie chapter 1 . 3/7/2018
I didn't realize the story wasn't finished until I hit the last chapter. And at least for me I felt like it ended on a sad note for Shepard. They were a happy family throughout the story and then Shepard starts worrying about dying and leaving Liara alone. I'd like to see another chapter or two to change the ending mood. On another note I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...next up Supercorp!
Guest chapter 16 . 12/14/2017
I get the need to re-affirm Shepard’s femininity but BLAH to the implication that Liara wouldn’t find an androgynous or masculine presenting or even suit wearing Shepard attractive because she’s apart of a female race. For someone so informed about the Mass Effect world, you clearly misunderstand a basic and major aspect of the Asari.
Amme92 chapter 50 . 5/9/2017
okey this is is officially one of my favorite fics ever. i want to get married, have a dozen kids and spend eternity in love. this is what this fic made me feel. often i just enjoy fics and they don't bring out a lot of feelings but this fic made me wanna run out the door find the girl of my dreams, marry her and get kids. seriously. loved it
inHaze chapter 50 . 2/15/2017
Good story, but naming a child Isis? You could have found a better name.
Guest chapter 50 . 1/4/2017
i loved this story!
Hannajira chapter 18 . 11/8/2016
I've always had a love/ hate thing for Javik. I wanted to explore more possibilities game-wise but seriously dude, the Primitives whooped metalass and there's ONE of your kind left ... um
HairyLimey chapter 50 . 11/9/2015
God i love this story please continue it again soon.
styxx1204 chapter 50 . 11/5/2015
I've read this story a million times and I love it so much! I will wait a million years for update if I have too! Pls update soon
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