nice

This is a Really Really good story and ut whould be awesome if you puplished more episodes

Great job!

I liked this, a lot.

Sweet! Loved it.

omg, I love that!you had me crying xxx

This was so beautiful I want to cry...

Pretty good. But you got reds name wrong. It's actually Raymond, not rammond. Also, he was stabbed in the carotid artery, not the jugular I think

This story is so amazing :) I recon they are father and daughter :) the story is freaking amazing please write more :)

Loved the story!
pls continue
good writing

awwww...sweet and criminal..GREAT MIX. thanx for the story.

Good story, but I almost skipped it because your story says you "ship" Liz and Red, and incest is just too sick to read. Your summary is misleading; this is not a shippy story, thankfully, but I think you might be losing readers due to your wording. That's a shame.

Very nice. I liked this story very much. I do hope that you will write more stories soon.

I love this! A bit short, but great overall!

Thank you for writing this! Please, consider continuing it.