I cried so hard. I thought he was going to see her in her final moments before she died and then go on a rampage, forever mourning her. That ending was amazing and your writing was beautiful.

I cried so hard. I thought he was going to see her in her final moments before she died and then go on a rampage, forever mourning her. That ending was amazing and your writing was beautiful.

Oh my goddddd. That was so beautiful. Thank you.

Oh, I adored this. I cried at the end thinking the worst...but then you gave me respite...

This was so sad, but so good! I'd love to read more of this

Aww that is so sweet and strange. This is marked complete but I'm guessing that is the end of the story...?

Aww this was getting so sweet and in such a short space of time. Damn the ending! On to the next chapter... :)

Loki in the Labyrinth ballroom. Loki granting flight. I'm not sure if I should keep reading your stories or not. You keep inserting Loki into my personal fantasies. Does this make them even more unattainable, or just more wickedly good? My poor brain.

This was beautiful. I loved it.

I still have tears in my eyes. This was so beautifully done, Ive no words.
Thank you for the HEA _

Oh Christ. I have tears in my eyes. Actual tears - what the hell.

What the actual f*ck lol. This was absolutely brilliant. Has not finished? Is she an old maid now? Or is she immortal because Of that apple? Who cares. It's awesome as it is.

Well done. Nicely written peice. Quite romantic... Poetic even. I don't think I could have forgiven you if Loki hasn't shown up lol.

I like the fantasy of it all. It's not overly realistic, there are not enough questions and the resolution comes almost too late, but that's part of its charm.

Nice work.

So sad but so beautiful. Is there more? I hope so.

Such a great story. Wonderfully descriptive writing and an interesting situation. I hope Loki can do something with the key.

I'm not sure if this is complete or not but I shed tears of joy when I read this chapter.

I don't know why, but I thought of the ending of The Odyssey, where Odysseus and his wife are given a second chance to live and love together.

Beautiful story.