OMG! This story is wonderful, surprising and very well written. You are to be congratulated ! Too bad it didn't continue.

So the elf bullied him to suicide, broke into his mind and then blackmailed him and Harry, just like yeah sure whatever happy to have you.
This has got to be one of the worst iterations of Harry I have Come across.

The story is very descriptive and has all the makings of a masterpiece, with very minor discrepancies though I suppose they will be easily explained, like the talks between Rexeran and Harry, if all of them are mental speak, some people won't understand the situation, and if they are not all the riders know Rexeran's name, which is not a good thing least according to the 'true names give power' statement.
Having finished reading this story, I wish to know when will it be updated again... I also just noted that the last update is in 2016, that too for the story anarikw. This one was last updated in 2008... The story has a very excellent following and quite interesting, though anarika is the first fanfic written by you I have read. That one is very well written too.
Hoping that this story will be updated as soon as possible.
Thanks for the story too... It's a good inspiration to accommodate different elements in a fanfic, making the story entirely different from the real Harry Potter stories, a novel experience.

Where was his bonded dragon to tell him who his new enemy was?

just re read this beautiful masterpiece and I remembered why it is one of my favourite stories EVER,, the story fully pulled me in and I was hooked for the entire duration.

Thank you for writing such a a wonderful and intricate story

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Great story. I love how detailed you are. I'm able to create mental pictures while reading. If I remember correctly, you're not a native English speaker? For English not being your first language you write very well. There is only one thing. In our grammar, in almost all cases, if a word ends in ly, it comes after a word that doesn't end in ly. As an example, instead of say, Happily he danced with her, it would be, He danced happily with her. I hope this is sort of clear enough as I'm not sure of an easier way of explaining this. Anyway, great story, keep it up. :)

So... does the world survive?

It is painful to read the dragons lines... You're not using quotation marks which you should be using. At least put the dragons speech in italics...

Y'know, they sound like elves who're sliding downslope into becoming Drou...Dark Elves.

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It's annoying.

I really hope that this can be continued at some point. I had a really hard time not continuing to read, especially the further I got.

I know I just posted but it really pissed me off on how weak Harry got in this book stronger magically weaker mentally and emotionally as the book progressed now he might as well take it bending over without lube and asking if he's doing a good job with as much balls he has now

Alright I'm done with this pancy ass Harry at first he was tough take no shit thought it would be interesting but now all o get is it's all my fault Harry I'll grovel at your feet not caring that it's thier fault in the first place he should have taken his pound of flesh from ALL OF THEM for what was done

Not sure if you check your reviews anymore, but when I cant find anything new to read, I commonly come back and reread this one!