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Woah...just... woah.

I did not see this coming. This story has been one hell of a trip, I kinda hope there's a sequel to this.

You're one hell of a storyteller dude.

God Damn.

And that's all I've gotta say to that.

God-fucking-damn.

Maybe I would be more eloquent than that, but I just stayed up all night reading this beast of a story that was like Pokemon, Dragon Ball Z, and Fredrick Nietzsche had a baby, and I need to sleep.

Maybe I will come back to give a better review of the story.

But for now, I will just marvel in awe and terror at this story and wonder if there will be a sequel following the Crimson King because I gotta know how those two will act upon meeting.

My head hurts.

Possible due to sleep and an impending existential crisis.

So, Good Night or Good Morning.

While I contemplate life and this fic.

Normally, I thank people for writing fics because every fic is an experience you only get because the author chose to sit down and actually write it.

I feel like a simple "thank you" wouldn't be enough to express my full thoughts here.

But still...

Thank you.

And WHATTHEFUCK.

WHAT A TRIP.

I'm even cursing freely.

Damn.

Man, this is seriously the best written story on this website. I remember finding this story years ago and following it ever since. And seeing it end is very bittersweet, and seeing May die just broke my heart. Anyway, great work here and I would love to see a sequel!

so, is there going to be a ciequal?

you've got some real talent in writing man

Just read the first fucking chapter, Drew. It was incredible.

I know you won't understand. At first, I too didn't. So don't bother.

Downloading the rest while I take some rest. You need to be serious to this kind of stuff. And its 4 am here. Better than a library.

Great... Fabulous...You know the only reason your story is not higher in Favourites and Followed List...is that this piece of art is too good be be appreciated by regular folks...Too good my man, too good.

I really do love the philosophy you weave so masterfully throughout your story, even if it is difficult to comprehend.

In particular, that last bit at the end almost sounded like song lyrics as I read it in my head. You are quite the poet and I can't wait to see how you bring this climactic tale to an end.

I have no idea where it will go, but I do know one thing with absolute certainty.

When this story ends, I will be genuinely sad to see it do so. This story has been... I don't even have the words to describe how I truly feel about just how amazing this tale you've crafted truly is to me.

I do like how you've given ash his power and the pokemon he's had so far. I can't stand it when people have ash catching 100 pokemon in the first two chapters and then he can somehow train them all up to be the same strength in a week.. Like seriously? Focus on a solid group (6-8) and train them to be complete badasses. Do great job for that!

Jeez I really hope you cut out this whole talking to Drew shit soon. Its really annoying having to read you switching past, present and future pov for Ash 5 times a chapter. Its be alright maybe at the beginning of the chapter but putting it in the middle completely obliterates any kind of flow that you could possibly build up.

Won't they think he's crazy in the end?

Just fucking wow. That was incredible.

oh boy, wonder what Ash going to do now. never expected sir aaron to be just, nothing.