I can understand Zeus fear... im glad things worked out in thr end. But i would be upset too if i was forced away from what the person i loved and cared for at rhe time to be with someone who I thought hated me. Anyways, i love the disney naming. Its funny and perfect. Love this. Write on!

I love this even more each time I re-read this!

Well, this was very good. I'm somewhat disappointed it ended so quickly, but it's still very nice. I have no more critique, you ended this story on a very positive and well executed note.

This is, by far, one of, if not the, best fic you've put out.

'don't tell her I said that or I will suffer' Takara you bloody genius. Who is Mania, by the way? I kinda wanna see broken!otherpercy, just because of what Persephone said.

Now, for the critique: I have none. My previous post, everything was cleared up in this chapter. Nico got the equivalent of a b*tch slap, he got a stern talking to, which was somehow humorous, Percy stopped buying his mopey crap, and he stopped being a mopey little snot. And you didn't do it in an annoying, cliche manner. You did it in a brilliant way. You just flashbacked, abruptly (nice), to Hades' having enough of Nico's crap, and basically said "I don't care what you do, just stop moping, and here's a reason to not mope". You didn't have some dramatic build up, or some cliche, or anything. It was just executed flawlessly.

*makes gasping noises while flailing*

GUhhhhhhh

Now, onto my review for this chapter. I enjoy the abrupt change in tone, for the flashback. I don't like particularly smooth transitions into flashbacks, I prefer them abrupt and sudden, thrusting the reader into another time and sometimes place.

The only thing I dislike is Percy feeling like he 'owes' Nico. I love Nico, but he needs to be given a b*tch slap across the face, and given a stern talking to, on to stop moping and guilting people. It's so cliche. I love him, but he needs to grow up and realize, maybe he and Percy weren't meant to be happily ever after. And Percy needs to stop giving ammo for Nico to be guilty, and stop buying Nico's bullcrap.

I feel like this has potential to be one of the greatest stories you've ever written..

Wonderful fic :)

Beautiful ~wipes tears from eyes~ Very beautiful.

An amazing fanfic, thanks for the story! Greetings from México :)

I know its a little late, but I just finished reading this.

Is it possible...? I don't know. Can I request something?

Do you think you can write a story about how Nico got 'his' Percy. Like how he went to Tartarus, how he found him, and how he fixed him...I would really love to read that story.

This was a really great story until nico showed up with other prey that's creepy and seems obsessive and I think unrealistic Percy should feel a little upset knowk someone sleeping with a part of you

I imaged that Percy was a female soooooo hard that is hurt my brian xD see? I said Brian, not brain

I adore this story!
Poor Triton, have to deal with Fabi/Sander already XD

I don't want it to be over... But since there's nothing I can do about I will just hope that you keep writing Tritercy stories. You write some of cosiest (probably not proper use of the word and misspelled but english isn't my first language) fanfictions out there. I even read this one before I went to sleep sinply because it gave me a good feeling.

Great ending!