Reviews for Broca's Aphasia
Mfittka chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
I don't know how to describe how beautiful, sad and full of Hope this fanfiction was... I'm amazed how good can you write. So I have a question; could I (try to) translate this beautiful work of art to polish? Looking forward to your reply. Love, Mary.
marmalade-snow chapter 1 . 1/19/2018
Well-written, interesting concept. You totally had me at the end - plot twist! Thanks for sharing!
PastaLover chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
I was near crying OMG that was saaaaad ! I love how you used the fact that Italy and Romano are half of each other in this fanfic . Haaaa the feeeeeels ! ~
alqui chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. I love the idea of the narration, with the bolded sentences.
Alytiger chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
This was amazing. I really loved your characterization and everything.
SomethingMoreQ chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I love this story. I remember reading it a couple months ago, forgetting about it, them remembering it again. Unfortunately, I did not know the name. So I literally searched, "condition that hinders speaking think a lot of words but only say one," on Google, because that's what I could remember. Finally, I found the disease name and typed it into the search bar, clicked a few filters, and found this fic.
I am glad that I did. Reading this again only makes it better. Broca's Aphasia is a fascinating disorder, and also terrifying. I think I would go crazy if I was trapped like Ludwig. It takes a good writer to make a reader change or think, and you've done both. I thought for about an hour after reading this, thoughts swimming through my mind. It made me think about how hard people with Broca's Aphasia have it. People're going to treat them like they're invalids because they assume that they're stupid or can't think right, but really, they can. Not being able to communicate properly is horrible. I'm glad I read this, because if I ever happen to meet a person with this disorder, then I know they they can understand me and how it feels for them, or something along those lines. Point is, I'm sure that most of the people that read this fic are more aware of this disorder and how they treat people.
Feliciano's disorder is also very interesting, and I love the story behind it.
Also I really like how you write Ludwig. Fist person is hard to do, especially if you're doing it for a canon character. But you've done it splendidly.
I like how you'll use the bolded words to emphasize the more important things or important thoughts. The effect adds a lot to the story, and I really like how you did it.
All in all, this story is beautiful and I'm sure that I'll read it any more times in the future.
RainbowYandere chapter 1 . 7/21/2016
i really liked this fic!
Carcrash87 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
This was amazing. I've read it like 3 times. Please make it a multi chapter fic it really is amazing.
Hetaliafangirlchan chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
beautifully written... had me in near tears. I normally only go for romance but this was definetly worth it. my hearts been shattered but thank you
skeletonskin chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
My heart... oh, my sweet heart. This was so heart-wrenching and beautiful, and the ending left me with the perfect cocktail of sweet and sadness. And I really loved reading about DiD, it's a very interesting condition and one that is very rarely represented or talked about. Loved it!
Dapper Dumpling chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
This was so sad but I loved it so much. I wish you had wrote more, but that's selfish. I loved the ending, I loved the research put into this, I love the story, I love the wording, I just love it all around! Complete 10/10 this was beyond fantastic!
LivingInAFaeryTale chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
This was beautifully written. This story feels realistic which I love. I would love to read a sequel if you wrote one.
weenie mother chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
AAAAAAA FUCK THAT WAS SO AMAZING! This just made it onto my top Hetalia fics, for sure.
SuperChocolateLovers chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
This si so sad. It was beautifully presented though and I loved every single second of reading it.
Hyoshado chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
I loved this! I really think this story was great in three ways, it was entertaining, suspenseful, and educates people. I love your writing and hope you continue!
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