You don't have to answer this if you don't want to, but how many chapters have you completed so far?

I read the first version of this book and the rewrite is just as good in my opinion. I remember some of the nicknames that Ash gave his Pokémon: Thor the Pikachu, Umi the Gyarados, Boss the Squirtle, Forest the Bulbasaur, Blades the Shiny Scyther (I can’t remember the Shiny Charmander’s nickname) and Gary’s beat down (Gary got what he deserved), Inspector Joy launching an investigation on the Oak’s, and almost shutting the Celadon City Gym down (Ash proved that he is definitely not a pushover), so I’m looking forward to seeing your plans for this story.

I can see great potential for this story so keep it up and believe in yourself. The only advice I can give is for you to take your time and have fun along the way.

I love this story especially with everyone doubting him which is even better when he proves them wrong, I am a bit confused on why you decided to delete you old story however that choice is yours and completely down to how you feel. I hope that you update this soon as this is one of my favourite stories in this fandom.

Good beginning. Hope there will be no romances till he finish orange islands.

Interesting beginning ;)

Wheres the rewrite

more

Why did you leave this story

Do NOT make Ash gay. PLEASE

No ash x girl . Do ash x lance please

Update ASAP awesome work

this is trash

Really excited to see you bring this story back, I loved the original concept so this is like a refined version of the old one but I still enjoy it very much. Can’t wait for the following chapters to see what changes etc

Well I can’t wait to see what you do with this. the only thing I really want see is professor a hole getting it. As in being hurt shocked unconscious etc.