Reviews for Intervention |
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jublke chapter 1 . 6/7/2014 Oh, you need to continue this one! That was great! |
fiesa chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 *laugh* I think Ben's having far too much fun here :) Nicely done, a good idea and an equally good execution. I wouldn't say you didn't manage to nail the humor. Especially the way Han regards his family - Jedi serenity, huh - was a lot of fun to read. What might have been a bit difficult is the fact that the reader already knows what the intervention (I didn't know what to do with the expression before a friend of mine sent me a short clip from How I met your mother, since I never watched the series I didn't know it, is it where you got the idea from?) is about due to the summary. It was good, either way:) I think it would be interesting had Leia, Luke and Co offered a solution to the problem, similarly to Ben. Han's reaction probably would be priceless :) |
StatsGrandma57 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013 ROFL! That was fun! Thanks for a bright spot in an exhausting day :) SG |
ccp chapter 1 . 10/29/2013 Poor Han |
TakesLeave chapter 1 . 10/29/2013 LOL! I think this story is great! Especially the part about the Jedi always wearing brown robes. Isn't that the truth? Now you should write a story where Han gets 'even' with his family by taking them all out to a fancy dinner, and he comes dressed like Lando (who gives him his fashion advice) and his family all crawls under the table with embarrassment and in the end, gladly give him his white shirt and black vest back! That'd be a great sequel. And you did a wonderful job with the humor in this one, too! |
12389011471 chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 This was so cute and funny. Loved it! You have a nice writing style too. :) I admit, I have doubles of some shirts in my closet that I wear a lot, but not 26 all the same! :D |
RedwingRising chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 This was some much needed humor in my life, so thank you for that! I really liked where you took this-it was not what I expected! |