| Reviews for Forward Unto Dawn |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 2h BAD GRAMMAR! IDIOT STUPID FOOLISH ! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3h BAD GRAMMAR IDIOT! YOU FUCKING IDIOT! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3h Give POV you fucking idiot! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3h Very grammar overracting. Fucking idiot! USELESS! Idiot stupid! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2019 Next chapter? |
 snow in the darkness chapter 11 . 7/20/2018 you might hate me for saying this but i won't give you any like or shit your story are pissed me off fuck you,you masochistic bastard |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/12/2018 "Watered down version of Kanshou and Bakuya?" ... The fuck is wrong with you!? Why wouldn't he just use a mundane pair of swords from his Blade works? What the hell are you watching, or reading that makes you think he would insult his preferred mêlée weapon by purposefully degrading them? I've put up with bad writing and poor characterization to this point because you presented a fairly interesting concept, but for some reason this just pissed me off. "Watered down Kanshou and Bakuya..." You actually portray your Shirou as thinking that. What a fucking joke. |
| Rawrking chapter 10 . 12/6/2017 Trash fic delete pls |
| Arcivus chapter 12 . 10/28/2017 Why?! I like this fic... Heck Im entranced with it! I mean... when can you see a Dark Shirou... xD... comin out from fics this time round? Not much. Which speaks a lot... Not only that but this fic is great! Awesome even... An update please... Just to sate this hanging feelin you left... Please... |
| Crosswald chapter 12 . 10/2/2017 I totally agree BrawlBroMario's review |
| BrawlBroMario chapter 12 . 9/29/2017 How dare you write such a good story but not update. That's a crime! |
| pdamian.msilva chapter 12 . 3/19/2017 A great story, I hope you are well and do not let this story die |
| Servant Ruler chapter 1 . 12/8/2016 This story is actually good... A hidden gem if a might say, hoping for more updates... |
| Im a guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2016 YoYoyo, i want see shirou go all Emiya on the world:? god damit this great fanfic. Pray for the updatu |
| Im a guest chapter 11 . 9/22/2016 I dont get how a dagger would beat shirou... |
