sorry but, this isn't *really* harry potter. He's the youngest of four, has no magic, both parents survived at least part of his life. So really, outside his name and his parent's names, he's not the same person, at all. He had none of the canon events shaping him, met none of the canon characters to shape him.

You wanted to write a fic to make harry and kelly meet and get together, yet you removed all the essential things that make harry potter, harry potter. You could've easily had him joining up post-second war to place him in the exact same position, even removed his magic at THAT point, due to something in how he beat Voldemort if you insist on him being non-magical.

But it's not really an HP/NCIS crossover if you just hand us an OC named Harry Potter.

Please update! Also, I think that the chapters could be a little longer, but it's not a major issue. Love this story, hope you get back to updating it.

I love this! It is so hard to find relatively good stories with Harry Potter/Kelly Gibbs. Please continue this story even though it has been a number of years. There are still improvements that can be made to the story though.

When will chApter 7 be up ?

please update, it's great

Please update! I love the story

This is probably one of the best Harry Potter/NCIS crossovers I have read. I've added it to my story alerts and am eagerly awaiting your next update. I hope you haven't abandoned this story.

Please update soon. I love this story soooo much!

Please update

Holy shit, the Potter family is fucking HUGE. It’s a nice change of pace though, I like the idea of Harry being related to so many people.

Update sssssssssssoon luved it

Hola por favor seguí la historia esta muy buena , espero tu próxima actualización con ansias . Éxitos

Are you going to continue this? I would love to keep reading!

It's been a long time since you've updated this story. Pleases tell me you haven't abandoned it. It's very well written and very unique. Please update.

would love to see more of this, its amazing!