I'm sorry this one went on hiatus. The title along with the author of Noticing Adam (aka killing Adam ;-) ) make it sound ominous. I'm sure the sacrifice would have been epic. The start looks promising.

I’m pretty late on replying on this story, but I love the idea behind the story, and although it might not happen. I hope to see more soon!

Well...I am 4 years too late but I loved what I read and will use my imagination to fill in how they escape. I hope that you might see this, and maybe come back.

This is very good so far. Thumbs up!

Love this! I know it's been a while, but is there any more? I would love to know what Hordak wants from Adora...

Please! Need to know how to follow this story!

Somewhat like"He Ain't Heavy"...but,minus the moon mirror,I wonder this one thing will the Horde ever give up & leave he Eternian royal family alone?!

Please continue, I gotta know what happens next.

I would love to see stories of where adora tries to turn into she-ra many times but every time she tries her sword it won't work for her!

Cool six chapters

interesting fic. plesae continue. would love to know how they got out of this

Cool I am intrested

A conversa entre Duncan e Marlena foi algo tipo - Uau! "Eu sei que Adam é Heman! Foco Homem em Armas". Uau! Eu adoro a rainha Marlena, ela é incrível! (risos).

Aww this was touching. Thanks for the update. I love Marlena's conversation (or should I say confrontation lol) with Duncan. Adora loves her brother. I like the healing scene. Poor Teela...tears in her eyes. Good job!

Pobre Adora! Hordak nunca cumpre o que promete, mas ela não tem outra escolha. Espero que o plano dela funcione, ou ela estará em sérios apuros.