Reviews for Family Day Out
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
good
ilsefutbolista chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
aw very nice. i loved this
angelscatie chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Awesome short story
blue dogs rock chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
really enjoyed reading empty glass of truth and callen and deeks bonding...awww!
thank you
Insertisernamehere chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
It would be awesome if Deeks and Callen were actually related
ananova chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Glad to see them making new, happier memories. This was a nice little oneshot that definitely fits well with your other story, thanks for sharing.
mysterius-lady-n-black chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
cute you should do more stories with them
jerseybelle chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Lovely story.
SilverSentinal21 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Great job, although since I haven't read the story I feel that Deeks and Callen are just too comfortable with the idea of being brothers. But you had ages to build that up so my mistake. I'm now convinced that you have inside info on "the name" which will be revealed some time this season. If you do, I approve! Great job, I needed the happy sweetness. I can't remember how to transliterate Russian for thank you, but I do know it, and I do thank you.
ncislaaddict123 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
hey gal ;0)

this was sooooooo sweet ...
when Callen woke up and Monty lays with him ;0)
the breakfast priceless ;0)
the familybonding time at the beach ;0)
my hart warmed and i love the way Clara grlt at ease ...
Marty is teaching Grisha how to surf ;0)...

nicely written ;0)

xoxo kerstin ;0)
knirbenrots chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
So sweet... Yes, I liked it!
DMVitale chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Love it. Monty stretching and farting is classic. Reminds me of mornings at my house. Good day at the beach. Hope there are many more. thank you.