very good

So good! I wish you'd continue

Really liked the story :) wish it were longer.

Wow this is all so amazingly in character. I think you've perfectly captured all of their voices. Thank you

oh no, I wanted more! I wanted they telling how much they love each other! it should have more chapters! but regardless, great job! that pretty much summons up hoe I feel about Rumple's whole existence!

Omg that was so great and you managed to keep them all in character for the most part, really enjoyed it thank you

Not bad. You could go on with this!
Liked it!

this is lovely and amusing and heartbreaking and just freaking perfect. I've been reading your Swan Queen fics all day and they are all equally amazing!

I love how this worked out for them... i especially loved the depth to it and how Regina plausibly could've been shaped and well manipulated by Rumple... well done! :-)

Ooh la la this story is getting gooooood! Please please continue! I am hooked! :) great! Love love love it! Like I say I'm hooked big time man! X

d'awwwwwwwwwww. lovely writing. i usually detest fluff. but i like how this was dark fluff. with excellent character portraits. well done, deary, well done.

Keep it going i just love it! Update soon.

awwwww, that's so sweet

Amazing. :D

i want more! that was wonderful