Naruto, as much as it pains me to say this, should've told Sakura to hit the bricks in this one. The Sakuradepicted here doesn't truly love him. Does't matter if she "always had an unhealthy addiction" to Sasuke, if she truly, and I mean legitimately loved Naruto here? She would've never, EVER risked her relationship by allowing that sorry sack of trash that is the Uchifag to kiss her. She cheated on Naruto. If you truly love someone? You'd never, ever allow yourself to do that. Period.

You sure know how to hit the feels! The people saying Naruto was done an injustice clearly dont know his character. It is PART of him to always love Sakira no matter what. Granted, I would still like to see more chapters.

This is amazing, you described Sakura's feelings perfectly. I wish you wrote this fic more. But, it was really good and thanks for writing it. At one time, I thought Sakura is needed psychologist due to her mind state, but I can closely relate to it and think she needs a help. She should ask Naruto for helping with the regard of Sasuke. Anyway, good story

Honestly the fact that it literally took only 10 minutes for her to betray Naruto, however minor the betrayal may have been, doesn't exactly bode well for their relationship. I don't think I would have been able to forgive her so quickly. Which makes Naruto the better man I guess.

OMG you hit them! You hit me right in the feels! Really hard!

(On my knees- crying) OH MY CHERRY BLOSSOMS! Thank you for this. That sick fuck Sasuke deserved enormous amounts of pain. NaruSaku are each other's everything. Of course Sakura had to realize she has great power over Naruto's emotions. I'm surprised with Sasuke unconscious Naruto didn't beat his body into a blood covered rag doll. ;-)

Kinda wish it would had taken more to get the trust back, but great read so far. Keep it up.

Very good story. Not much far fetched.

I knew of someone who couldn't stop thinking about an ex-boyfriend from some years ago. If you're in a relationship but someone very dear from your past appears in front to you and want to kiss you, I think more than one would let that happen, not a lot would it let get deeped though.

This ended in a cliffhanger but a good one (there a not a lot a are good ones). I prefer to think that they would work to get over her mistake, starting by the fact that she acknowledged it and left Sasuke to catch him. Is she would have slept with her ex-teammate, that would have been an unforgivable act by most.

Good story. Well written. Thank for sharing it.

eh. sakura's such a bitch in this fic. and it pissed me off that he just fell for her words at the end. had she really only looked at naruto and no one else she wouldn't let sasuke kiss her.
it almost feels like she dates ("likes") naruto out of pity - especially when she was thinking of all the things naruto did for her.

WOW, this one really sucked bad. I wish this never happens to Naruto. In this particular scenario I wish Naruto would have killed Sakura, than sell all his self respect and accept her apology so easily.

I don't want to discourage you from writing, but if you are gonna write such stories where a so good person like Naruto makes a total foll of his own respect, than it is far better not to write at all.

P.S. I am again sorry for the Harsh words but srsly you did total injustice to Naruto here. It would have been even better if Naruto would have moved on. You just completely destroyed all the respect of Naruto in this story I have for how Naruto is in manga.

i think that naruto shouldn't have forgiven sakura so easily.
in the next chapter i think that you should have another sasusaku moment and have naruto catch them again to make the fic more angsty.

i like the story but the thing is i think sakura was supposed to hurt a little bit longer b4 things got back to norma. She needed to feel the pain naruto felt after what he saw she had to beg for fgiveness for a month or so...

I liked it, the plot was very cute :)
I think your writing style has potential too, you only need to be a bit more precise and make sure everything makes sense. Often, one thinks the way one writes makes things clear enogh but sometimes others have a hard time understanding it. Especially with emotions, so try to describe a bit more and ask yourself why the characters would do something and how they would react.
Don't let negative comments get to you, some people are just mean.
So keep on writing! :)

Not enough drama.