Reviews for Shadow of Darkness Chapter 1 |
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The True Zoroark chapter 2 . 2/28/2015 Oh...and I just created a form for this, so if you have any tips or such you can post them here..cuz for some odd reason I wants see the reviews here...I had to manually look in my email...the form is call...the return of Alex Wolf..so...I'm off to start chapter 3! |
The True Zoroark chapter 1 . 2/28/2015 I'm happy to finally see some action around my few chapters I have made...looks like ill have to start making more chapters now :D thanks for the reviews! |
TheOwlGamer chapter 1 . 2/28/2015 Hey, I read your review on Imaginary Lex's story and I just wanted to say I had that struggle too. My first story wasn't a huge success. Don't feel like you're the only writer who have these struggles. Just, look ahead and hope for the best. :) Don't give up. Many newcomers face this event. P.S. Update and publish your stories in the future! |
TheOwlGamer chapter 3 . 2/18/2015 Hi! I recommend you to write paragraphs instead of writing directly. It'll give the readers eyes a break. But besides that point, it is a great story! Keep up the good work! If my advice helps, I'd be happy to help anytime! |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/15/2014 Meow |