I want the exchange with the baby giraffe comment to be there. I always laugh there.

I like this! Glad to see someone else attempting a multiple doctor story. (Check out mine: a TARDIS family reunion) writing for multiple doctors is harder than it looks! I'd like to see where you take this.

(first chapter) *11 crashes through ceiling* I HEARD MY NAME!

I look forwards to your re-write, this is a funny story... :)

I love multi-Doctor stories :D

Baby Giraffes are cool. XD

I guess the one thing I liked the best was where Rory and Rose were talking about how they met the Doctor, so it would be neat if you could keep that in. Other than that, I have no suggestions! Can't wait for the re-write!

Are you continuing this story?

I think it's pretty good! It's even better if you can picture them each in your head and read it like how they would say it. With Rose and Rory that was pretty easy. Overall, I think its interesting. And since it was was the first time writing Doctor Who, it was good. :) A bit out of character with 11, but Rory, Rose, and Mickey were in character. 10 and 9 were sometimes out of character, but there were times when 10 was in character too. So don't worry. Write more Alonzo! :)

This is awesome, mostly because the characterization is SPOT ON. I can hear everyone's lines perfectly! Awesome job :)

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You got eleven's personality perfectly!

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THIS IS SOOO PERFECT! I CANT FIND THE RIGHT WORDS TO EVEN DESCRIBE HOW PERFECT THIS IS! ABSOLUTELY LOVELY! ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE PERFECT AND EVERYTHING IS PERFECT!

Also... I was wondering if you could add a little more Rose and eleven feels? Fantastic, thanks.

Write more soon please! Absolutely Brilliant!

Baby giraffes are cool

I'm amused xD.