T.T Oh my god, this is just so wonderful. I absolutely love Manga! Lance and this is just so very perfect, from the innocent interaction in the beginning to why Lance is so obsessed with revenge against humanity at the end and channeling Pokemon emotions into destruction. I love it!

Fantastic character piece, though not so much for the central character

What has been said about Lance that hasn't already been said? You say it with panache, but I like what the Pokemon have to say a lot more. The notion of how Pokemon communicate-and how Lance has to respond to them-is fascinating. Pokemon don't have our words, so Lance and his dragons have to parse together notions. I could gush all day about how cool that is.

Very clever and very well done

This is a very atmospheric story and a great portrayal of PokémonAdventures!Lance. I really like how you portray the Pokémon in this story. The progression from the quite light-hearted interaction with the Dratini and the Caterpie/Butterfree – Weedle/Beedrill duo to the very dark end was excellent.

As a huge fan of Lance, it kills me that the Manga Lance doesn't get a whole lot of love on FF. That being said, this was a splendid interpretation of his character. I loved it. My only complaint is that the grammar was sometimes a bit wonky, but I still loved the story.

Awesome job.

absolutely beautiful. Manga!Lance doesn't really get enough love...this was very well written and well thought out. Keep it up!