Reviews for Monochromatic Sun
Vongola10 chapter 28 . 11/12/2018
Please continue with your story I love it
Lliecpearl chapter 5 . 2/5/2018
Oh my god. Idk why you stopped writing all of the sudden, but this is the first time I'm reading this story, and to be honest, I'm hooked! Honestly, your originality and imagination is so amazing and again, this is the first time I've read something as wonderful as this in ff (cause the others are 99% most of the time about sky flames and bullshit "harmonization" crap). Anyways, I hope your wellbeing is okay, and I sincerely hope that you didn't abandoned this story of yours. This is a hidden gem in ff, and if you want a bigger audience, I would suggest reposting this story to wattpad as a fanfic. Atleast you will get the credit you deserve when you post it there as they have the right credentials to make the content rightfully yours (so that people can't steal it). I'm not gonna beg for you to reupdate this, or follow up with this story, instead, I'm gonna give you an advice to just believe in yourself, and let the writer in you grow. You're awesome, and I hope you have a beautiful life going on now. (ps. I also secretly hope that you're not dead!)
ShotaroxPhillip chapter 28 . 5/20/2017
i would love to find out what happens next
NorCal.NEH chapter 28 . 12/29/2015
Please update
Visually Dreamer chapter 28 . 12/27/2015
I have no word to describe. This story is amazing. Please update soon!
Azurame Neve chapter 28 . 11/15/2015
T-this..oh my, you gotta update soon, author-san! You can't just stop here, I wanna know what happens next!
MangoPeanutSituation chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
:D A good deed a day, keeps depression at bay, for you and they!
Yoru-no-Ookami chapter 8 . 8/2/2015
I like this story. I find the concept of the comfort brain imagery (or whatever you want to call it) intriguing. As well as the fact that Tsuna's Dying Will Mode is essentially a separate entity from Tsuna himself. Just wanted you to know that I'm happily reading.

P.S. I don't know if your breathing pattern after Tsuna was drowning was intentional, but most of the time when I hear someone is supposed to calm down, or even in yoga, it's in through your nose and out through your mouth. Just thought I'd mention it in case it was a mistake.
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
There are typos. You misspell 'corridor', 'environnment', 'girlish shriek' and 'guard'. If I were you I'd do some quick editing.
DominoBrofis chapter 14 . 2/18/2015
Abubu that was so cute 3
UnbridledArtist chapter 28 . 11/21/2014
I love this story so much. I find my self logging in everyday to see if you have updated or not. Sometimes I wish that these chapters where longer, but as a fanfiction writer myself I understand how hard it can be to make a chapter longer when you feel that it is finished. I also understand that life can get in the way of writing as well (I am a victim of this). I would like to see the Arcoboleno gain allies out side of the human population. I think it would be interesting.
DragonSlayer412 chapter 28 . 11/7/2014
Yay! It updated! I was missing your writing!
this is a nice update. It made me squeal with happiness!
lovleydragonfly chapter 28 . 11/6/2014
Iii LOOOVE THIS FIC PLS UPDATE SOON
aminaluvr4life chapter 27 . 11/3/2014
Love the story! I look forward to reading more in the future :)
DarkIceAngelFlare chapter 28 . 11/3/2014
YAY FOR UPDATES! Thanks for taking the time out of your day to finish this. It must have been really hard to figure out how to deal with Byakuran in the end. Well, he does like his games so this is plausible. But can I just say that I really really wanted Reborn to rearrange his face? Also, will Tsuna be suffering from any trauma? After all, he was tortured for a long while... I foresee angst even though I really wants the fluff T-T anyway, thanks for the update and good luck with your move!
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