Love this story, hope you continue it some day.

I’m so upset that this fanfic is abandoned.

Mannnn I fell in love with this story from the very beginning and it’s been 37 really interesting chapters. I’m bummed out.

I would hope to god and ask and beg for you to come back and update this story, but it’s been 4 years. Even so, I feel like reviewing and just hope you understand how much I appreciate what you’ve written.

It really is a great story. You don’t seem to have the highest confidence in it and sure it’s not perfect but I can’t imagine anything that is.

What I love is how unique this story is. Most stories similar to this would turn Rose into a Mary Sue or make her overpowered or something and completely sideline everyone else.

But not you. Donna and Rose are still around, and we’re introduced to Amy, Rory, and River, and yet EVERYONE has a role to play. Everyone is different. And that is super satisfying. You even started introducing Clara via a mention of an echo.

I also love how Rose is different from her experiences. There’s a lot of mystery involving Rose and it’s just been teased at us and I love that it hasn’t been revealed yet and there have been hints and I was hoping that we’d get to the Day of the Doctor (i was drooling at what you were going to do with the Moment) before the chapters ran out.

Even tho Rose has changed, she’s not an instant problem solver or anything and she stills struggles- honestly, this genuinely feels like the Rose we left with the meta crisis on Bad Wolf Bay. She’s not the same as the 19 year old that got in that crazy box with the 9th Doctor. She’s hardened, less impulsive, and yet so very HUMAN.

She still makes mistakes, still falls victims to her emotions. And I love that.

I really loved where this story was going and I hate that this is it. I would beg you to come back and finish it but like I said, it’s been 4 years. I’m not going to follow this story for that reason. But I hope that you by some fluke do come back and finish it- and if you do, please message me. I would love to see this continued.

Take care my friend.

Please don’t be abandoned I adore this story I’m so attached dont do this to me lol

I’m approaching the end... please don’t be abandoned...

This is such an underrated fanfiction

Ah i think you’re doing fine. Maybe a little less mentioning of Rose’s makeup wouldn't hurt.

Oh you fucking genius you... brilliant way to introduce the echoes. I fucking gasped when I read “Oh just his mom Clara.”

Seriously impressed.

Loved this chapter. Love that Rose is different from her UNIT and Torchwood experiences than one would believe just by looking at her. It’s depth, and even the Doctor can’t see it yet.

I don’t love making Angel Bob different however. There was a charm to Angel Bob that i kinda feel like I’d no longer there

I loved this chapter.

Rose becoming the poison serpent shows that she’s flawed, and not just that, that she’s flawed because of her experiences. In away, she BECAME the abomination.

Gonna read more.

I absolutely love everything you’ve done with Rose and Donna and Amy. You’re perfect.

I think you did fine

Hot take- I bet Rose doesn’t age. That’s what id do.

I have no idea how you hated this! It's one of my favorite chapters so far actually, with the sweet Doctor/Rose time and his POV for a bit. I love seeing their relationship progress.

I know you wrote that ages ago, but you never needed to worry, that was an amazing chapter! I'm thrilled to read Eleven and Rose's adventures!

I don't know how River is still a thing when she wasn't conceived in the TARDIS but I am glad to found a fic about what if the Doctor hadn't been shot that day. I mean it could have so easily have gone differently. Though I am a little sad to see Amy getting such a smaller part (as Donna is still there) but happy that the Doctor and Rose got to keep each other.