Is this and MJ: Apprenticeship Bayverse?

Ok. My hatred of Sentinal is back ;P

*DOTM Spoiler*

Argh! You’re making me like Sentinal...I don’t want to like Sentinal. He killed Ironhide! By stabbing him the back, no less.

Still, great story so far. Got hooked after the first chapter. Reads so naturally, which is hard to do well. Great job!

Did you bring in Jazz? :)

ok I had read the revised version first, but for some reason I like this one a bit better in terms of the action, and that u have my Jazziebot in here, lol, and I like Ratchet's character better, and I'm rambling. amazing story love and can't wait for the next chapter of the revised version

This is the best chapter yet! LOVED IT! The chase was awesome and finding new stuff about Ratchet was great ti! Great character development all around.

This story is really good; I was hooked from the start! I look foward to any further updates!

Can't wait to see how Ratchet and the others meet Ironhide, Prowl, Jazz and the Terror Twins! That should be entertaining! There will probably be a lot of wrenches thrown!

Aaand they jinxed it. Great. This should be interesting.

Oooh! Avalon just got burned! Karma!

Ah, got ya.
Looks like Ratchet's getting attention... and a lot more responsibility.

I enjoyed this update. It was not nearly as 'actiony' but hey, not all of them can be. I like the fluff between Ratchet and Nova. She seems to be really developing, especially in this chapter. Before this she seemed kind of far off. Her talking to Ratchet and getting a little, ahem, touchy feely with him kind of brought her into a different light (lol I sense a beautiful love relationship on the horizon) teheheh :P

It was quite entertaining and was written very well. Keep up the wonderful work!

Oh my word...that was better than I could have ever imagined... the whole scene, how he toyed with Breaker, I didn't want to root for him, but I knew who he was and I... I just loved it. He was perfect. Absolutely perfect. It caught my attention immediately and kept it until the end. Well done. Very well done.

Ahh, I know I haven't been around for a while. Life has gotten hectic and out of control. I'm getting slagged with schoolwork from every side. It sucks. I will continue reading these awesome updates that I've been missing.

Don't jinx yourself Ratchet.

XD Love the backstories so far! Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you! Haappyy biirthdaaay to 2211Nighthawk...happy birthday to you! *lol*

"...He's swearing so he's fine."
BEST LINE YET! XD