Wonderfully done. I would've loved to see this on the show. We need more Kate/Alexis interaction! I loved the way you approached this one

I love that thy left that conversation open to interpretation so great pieces like this could be written.

Just another example of how your fanfiction perfectly fills the gaps in what is said on camera.

Beautiful way to touch on this conversation. Have not seen many dare to do it, but many with me wanted to see it closer. Hear it. This is great!

Loved this follow-up to the episode. Perfect.

This is perfect and beautiful! Well done, thanks for sharing :)

This one has Kate's voice sounding a lot like you. Not a bad thing necessarily, just something I noticed.

Seem to have missed it during the week. Now I really enjoyed reading your story while having a large cup of sunday coffee :-) Your story is what I had hoped for a talk between Alexis and Kate in the show. I particularly loved your start in the middle of their conversation. Thanks :-)

Couldn't think of a more fitting conversation between Kate & Alexis myself. Both women are carrying so much baggage & have so much to overcome from their respective past experiences. When they finally reach that accord & that trust, what a great relationship these very similar women will have.

Ah chez,
Once again you have poured sand into the cracks of a Castle scene, smoothing the rough and unfinished ending we were given into fuller, more colorful images. I wanna have what you write be our Castle reality.
Thank you.

how do you do that? finding that ultra realistic, clichéless kind of atmosphere and creating it through words that are so in character. while drawing a beautifullittle storyarc, addressing the issues, shifting perspective without disturbing the rhythm of the dialouge. (sorry for spelling mistakes, i'm german :) )

Thanks for finishing that scene. :)

Very nice

Ahhhh, how did I miss this yesterday?

Loved to hear their convo. A's argument makes sense; that's where she comes from.

Loved how Kate explained what their family is, more than just blood, and the realisation that she steps back, that she needed to step forward from now on, perfect!
thanks!