Liking the story but chapter 13 has too many missing ‘the’ and ‘and’ to make it readable.

you have a tendency to leave out words such as a, the, of to, from, as.

you have a tendency to leave out words such as a, the, of, from,

Sarah I just read all 27 chapters. I love the story! I am wondering did I miss something that Sarah left the CIA? She seems to be away from them a long time and wouldn't they be looking for her. I love it when they found out they were friends when they were young. Looking forward to the DNA results.

Ken

I am thrilled to see another new chapter! This family get together was very nice. I am enjoying watching Chuck and Sarah grow together in their relationship. This was a wonderful job as always ! Looking forward to seeing more from you soon hopefully!

It doesn't matter how hurt he was, if Chuck is willing to purposefully hurt Sarah in any way, he is not worthy of her.
She was lost, confused, and hurt by her relational compass [Chuck]. He has brought an eye-for-an-eye policy into the relationship.
Unless they both choose to always treat the other person with love, gentleness, and respect no matter what the other does, they will never trust each other and will likely be miserable. Even if they are together.

The Family dinner chapter was changed a little, it makes better sense this way. Kudos for the change. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Absolutely amazing story. Love everything about it. I was to engaged with the story to stop and write a review till now lol. I just found it and I got to say I'm hooked. It's just amazing. I really really love it. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us. I cant wait for more.

Sort of re-read this story again, to refresh my memory. It’s excellent the second time around and looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

update D

Welcome back cant wait for more.

I enjoyed your story quite a bit. This AU is a really interesting turn from canon. There are certainly a lot of directions you could purse with the story. Sarah and Ellie meeting the Irvings, Chuck's spy training, WIS, the pending wedding and their life together. I'm excited to see what comes next. Maybe even an extended Team Bar...Irving(?) in WIS where James, Casey and the CAT squad all join ranks? Worse things could happen...but then again maybe not.

Great news!

Just thought of a chapter for when you start this story again. After Chuck has been through training and a few missions with his new spy service, Chuck runs into Casey and decides to tell him that he is alive and whatever else he wants to tell Casey.

I wish you could make it longer, with James's training and a couple of missions. So looking forward to your uodate.