aaaannnddddd... update? Pleasee?

As this is about first impressions and change in order, have you realised the first sentences are easily misunderstood. As I read it, it sounded like Charles immediately asked for Jane's hand in marriage. The I kept wonderin why the first chapter was not more affected

While I love HEA, this is taking it a bit too far I think. Everyone is turning so nice. Mrs Bennet suddenly finds love and reason, everyone is getting engaged, Lady Catherine suddenly encourages Darcy to marry someone else, miss Bingley sees her foolishness and turns nice... only evil seem to be Mr Collins and perhaps Lydia.

Mr Collins nad his leers, not to mention Caroline Bingley always being on the stage are turning this otherwise enjoyable story angsty. Their roles are clear and should be lightened in order to make this more enjoyable to read

This chapter is amazing.

I loved this chapter.

I'm loving your story.

Awesome chapter.

I liked this chapter.

Great chapter.

I liked the chapter.

I am enjoying your story a lot. I have noticed that you seem to have mixed up the spelling of "then" and "than". "Then" has to do with time and "than" is used when comparing things. Keep up the good work. I wish I had the creativeness you have, I can only spell and use grammar correctly!

I love your story so much, it has made me laugh and cry. Thank you x

Great to see a new chapter. Also great to see Lizzy accept Darcy at the end of the chapter. Looking forward now to see how things continue to evolve towards a formal courtship. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Lovely! Just lovely!