Wow I love it! XD
I actually read this on some other website before ( can't remember which thou...) and its still awesome enough that I actually managed to read it all the way through again! :3
I love your metaphors ( I think its called metaphors anyways...) and I learnt some new words too! :)
Thanks _

Heh... it's damned difficult to read this chapter while listening to swing music.
You should try it sometime. The cadence is totally contrary to the normal rhythm of swing.
But my roommates were in an amorous mood.
I don't need to hear that shit.
Kudos for the tasteful fade out scene.

It's a little mind boggling that this was written 9 years ago, I hope you still check your account regularly to see this. This story was probably one of the most beautiful works of fiction I have ever read. To many occasions my eyes watered. So beautiful sad and pathetic, I fell in love. Thank you for writing an epilogue, it was just...a perfect way to end.

I never deeply though about the plot of Gundam Wing, but over the years, I've realized that there was pain - a lot of it. Your story was dripping with it; It made seem all the more realistic - emphasizing the amount of pain wars create. You made a valid point in the last 5 chapters, that killing innocents for the sake of peace is no reason. I'm sorry if I'm rambling, but I was just so moved by your story. This is going on my favorites. Just, absolutely beautiful.

T.

Hey there, I've been reading and re reading this story for, well, years actually. Its one of my favorites ever. I did want to mention in a quick review though that the Lifehouse song is actually called 'Breathing' not 'Where I wanna Be' Amazing song by the way.

Toodles

Ali

Yay! Well, not yay, since Heero's all emo-can't-feel, but hey! -_- That's Heero.

Agh! My roommate's asleep again, so it's the end for this review. Ciao!

-Kayura

I LIVE! _; So hi! I'm back, still somehow alive, though I've gained an alarming number of cavities from all this sweetness... *ahem* Well! Relena's a stupid prat, and Heero's a social dunce! Shock. At least Duo's there to be a complete chit through the proceedings and make me bust out laughing. _

Next... chapter!

Oh, btw, you have a LOT of ellipses in this! Just FYI. _

-Kayura

Wah, the metaphors, the metaphors. *explodes* And the sap! The sappity sappiness of the sap! *hears trees crashing* And the Romeo and Juliet! Very well played, but even as an English major, I gotta say I hate that damn poem. -_- Extremely hilarious, though, having Heero play Juliet's role. WIN.

-Kayura

Wah! I'm back! I only got part way through this before it was sleep time, and then classes... well, I shall see you in the next chapter!

-Kayura

lol, I was totally with it until the last sentence when Duo thought he wanted to be by Heero's side forever. That's just so... cheesy and sappy and... girly, I guess? Meh.

Gotta love the fail assassins. Poor Stella has her work cut out for her.

And for shame, Heero. Out the window? Ker-splat? Lulz.

-Kayura

Okay, quick review because my roommate is asleep.

Hi! *waves* Awesome work. Absolutely freaking awesome.

How does anyone know Heero's age? And is he really still 5'1" and 100 lbs.? Is that even healthy?

Oh! And if a sniper was there, and they wanted Heero dead, why not snipe him and game over? Or why not get someone who isn't dumb enough to hang out on a motorcycle? Operation DIANA FAIL, lol.

Okay, that's it, didn't mean to slow you down or anything, just random things I noticed. Like Prologue being spelled wrong - typo: Prolouge. lol.

Okay. Back to the story. Guess this wasn't all that quixk though, huh? Sorry, roomie!

-Kayura

I just love your story. I have read it more than once, and Im back to do so again. lol. Just love it!

I love this story I read it again! lol but anyway I remembered something... the song with the lyrics

'cause i want nothing more than to sit outside heavens door and listen to you breathing

its where i want to be

...

even if you dont want to speak tonight thats all right, all right with me...

well anyway that song is called Breathing by lifehouse. but anyway just had ta let ya know! Still love your story!

WOW is all i can say about this story. It was really heart touching and sad. I must say i have never watched gw but my sister has she told me to read this story and i am awe struck. I just wanted to say it is an exelent story and i look forward to reading more. This was only the 2nd fanfic that i read and i enjoyed it very much.

I ABSOLUTELY WORSHIP your writing skills and I love everything about this story. Yours of the few stories whereby the characters actually stay in character. This story rocks! Love the song choices by the way... especially the lifehouse one! :)

-Nikki

i just want to tell you, that i have read a ton of gundam wing stories, and i have never read one so well written where everyone stays perfectly in character. Definetly my favorite story ever!

blaine