Wow! Really great job! That classic scene of making out to avoid getting caught .. what can I say, I'm a sucker for some clichés ;) it was HOT! and gave me the keenler feels! And also managed to stay in character, which is impressive, so kudos to you!

il y a une suite ou pas ? elle est trop bien cette fic.

Please post the next chapter

Oh man it was even better with Ressler's POV. And the end bit with Red was soooo good! I'm becoming consumed with this ship!

I'm kind of just drunk on the shipiness of them in this. I thought I wouldn't get sucked into shipping with this show, but sure enough, here I am!

Ohhh how I wish this REALLY had happened on the show, clichè yes, but OMG. Keep writing fics like this one please

I like how in character Liz, Donald & Red are here. I want more. Please tell me this isn't the end? :(

Woo! Very nice! Hot! I like them together and you do a nice job of getting them together and staying in character. Hope the show will do the same.
Thanks so much for sharing!

Wow, the temperature in the room just ratcheted up a few degrees! I like this pairing for some reason, and this scene was hot.

I loved this POV. And adding Red's observation at the end was the cherry on top. Please write more of these two!

I liked it

I've read a lot of your writings and I can honestly say you are amazing! The way you can come up with these story lines and your writing is fantastic! I'm a native English speaker and even I can't write like that! Although I have one request; please .. PLEASE continue this scene into an actual story? This is probably THE best keen/ressler fics I've read and it's left me hanging for more of this story line.
Please and thank you! :) x

I loved it! The undercover op was such a good idea, it was SO GOOD!

Thanks for writing it, keep the great work!

Loved it.

Oh that was such an awesome ending! I love the dialog between Red and Ressler on the show and you captured it here.