I love me some MakoHaru

Hard is just like a baby with Makoto how cute

You should think about expanding this story. It's a great concept, and I think it would be wonderful to see this as a multi-chapter story.

I enjoyed it a lot and I found it so cute! I just want to hug Makoto and glomp all over Nitori. Makoto's job isn't easy; just goes to show how much he loves Haruka. And a jealous Rin; my gosh!

From the sound of the summary it wasn't what I was looking for, maybe put what pairings this has in the summary... I cant really review more than that since I didn't finish reading since the pairings made me unhappy.

nice