Wow this wS interesting! Great job with Thalia and Jason!

Aww...so sweet!

This is so neat! :) LOVE THIS and will definitely fav.

Gotta love that Grace sibling bonding! ;)

Is this a one shot? Cause if it isn't you should really start updating.

I love these type of fics. Fics about friendships or family are so rare and most of the time when they're done it's cheesily done.

interesting and strangely heartwarming, more so at the end when Thalia just curled up and went to sleep without a second thought...
I was never much of a Jason fan... but this was good.

Finally, it's about time someone wrote a good brother sister story for thalia and jason. People always try to make jason ask around when thalia is the most obvious person to talk to since she would be willing and doesn't take offense at anything too easily. Can't wait till the next chapter.

That was just...so beautiful man *sniff*

Oh, gosh.

You have such a nice writing style; smooth and clear. I'm so glad you were able to make this one-shot just right.

It's a good idea, and you wrote it perfectly, but some people have a way with taking good ideas and making the actual writting really bad.

You didn't make it too cheesy, like a lot of writers here do. The emotions felt real, as I was the one feeling them. I honestly got goosebumps at one point.

I love the brother and sister relationship between Thalia and Jason. Once again, it wasn't too cheesy, but it wasn't completely bland, either.

This is a really good lil' one-shot, and I hope that you keep on writing things like this.

Have a good night! :)