it seems that the ripples you have already created would change the upcoming events more than what you implied at the beginning... either way interesting read

They are in a relationship an die will cheat on Rory with Shane? What is wrong with you disgusting pig?

I'm wondering how and idiot like you manages to go through life! If you would have the ability to think you would have noticed that doing this exactly how it was on GG doesn't work! They were already in a relationship, he saw her at the Bus station and he still left. There is no way that Rory would be just okay with this and making idle chit Chat on the phone. She wouldn't go to New York to him and she definetly wouldn't tell him that she came because he didn't say goodbye. This doesn't work when you make those changes in the Story. Her excuse for visiting only works on the Show because there they haven't been together. In the end you are just embarrassing yourself showing us want an pathetic idiot you are. You didn't thought it through that it wouldn't work like that.

So you make her so pathetic that she would actually run to him after he just left her? Go get yourself checked out you dumb bitch. God please let it rain brains cause of seriously Need one!

Wow you are one of the most unoriginal writers ever! Can't you even make up your own damn story? Even a freaking monkey could be teached to copy and paste. Why do you bore people with rehashing the show? And then you make it even worse! Asking at the end of the Last chapter if Jess will leave. Well duh! Everything else would have meant that you can actually think for yourself. You are so dumb it hurts.

awesome!

hahaha awesome!

Exciting. Im loving the Smalltalk yet important changed you have made

I'm glad she admitted to writing the letters! I cannot wait to see what he does!

I like the story, but it's pretty much exactly the same thing that happened on the show. There isn't enough of a change. Sure, you change couple things here and there and Dean and Rory broke up way earlier, but aside from that it's the exact same story.

Ahhhhh

love it! update soon :)

phenomenal!

I love this story

That Rory is always afraid of what she feels...I'm looking forward to seeing if Washington helps her as much as she thinks it will.