| Reviews for The Betrothal |
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  Susan chapter 42 . 6/15 Love your story, I do wish for you to continue! |
| Hannah chapter 42 . 5/17 Wow! I have read this whole story in a day or two.. I am very impressed with your writing and I dare say it is longer than the book! I do wish this story to be concluded however. It is upsetting to read so much and not have an ending. I wonder why you stopped writing 3 years ago! This should be published! |
 musingmarauder chapter 42 . 5/14 I've really enjoyed this and hope you continue this. I'd love to read your take on the wedding. |
| HPforever2018-3 chapter 42 . 3/17 OMG I have just read 42 chapters only to find out, that this story is not finished. Neither is it listed as such, which I have failed to see. I only saw the many chapters, and in my head I made the - incorrect - conclusion, that it was a finished story. More fool to me. Anyway back to this amazing story. I normally have a bit of a thing against stories, that goes very much into pretty much all details, including the tea beeing served, colours of the dresses, they went up the stairs etc etc. This story is like this, and for some reason I still love it. I also love the verys slow burn in it. Last but not least it is so fascinating to see how Darcy and Elizabeth goes from being in love to also being in lust. In our modern days it is normally the other way around. It is good to see, that they not only love each other but actually want each other as man and woman. The romantic love is very fine indeed, but for a marriage to work out there must also be lust. Hoping against hope that this story will eventually be finished. |
| heypolly chapter 42 . 3/15 Excellent write! |
| MissyDy chapter 12 . 3/12 Just once I would love for Jane to have to deal with a woman prowling around her betrothed like a a cat in heat only to have her concerns dismissed and be admonished to be kind. She really gets on my nerves. She’s not a loyal sister. I don’t imagine her walking three mile through the mud to attend Elizabeth. |
| martuxipm chapter 42 . 1/12 Hi. I really enjoy this story! I am wondering if you have considered continuing with it since it has been a long time from your last update |
| shoopdan chapter 42 . 1/7 Please continue when you have time to grace us! |
| Guest chapter 42 . 6/14/2019 Please update. |
| menglish0 chapter 1 . 4/23/2019 I love this! When are you updating?! I’m dying to know what happens next! |
| janefanatic chapter 14 . 4/13/2019 Thanks for sharing! I hope Lady Helen is not too cruel to Mr. Darcy as punishment for his not telling her of his engagement personally! |
| janefanatic chapter 13 . 4/13/2019 I hope Georgiana doesn’t get into too much trouble! Thanks for sharing! |
| janefanatic chapter 12 . 4/13/2019 I enjoyed the Miss Bennet/Miss Bennet confusion with Lady Helen! I also liked Georgiana’s spunk! |
| janefanatic chapter 11 . 4/13/2019 I was a little confused at the end of the chapter when you seemed to alternate between calling him Darcy and Fitzwilliam. It was a bit confusing to determine who was speaking. Thanks for sharing! |
| janefanatic chapter 10 . 4/13/2019 I’m proud of Bingley for refusing that awful Miss Bingley! He should refuse to give her her pin money for the quarter. |
