Oh my, initially everything went so well - Liara and Shepard meeting again, re-uniting, going to sleep together even (seriously though, Shepard should have taken a shower first) - that I thought, 'hey, this is neat, there is no "slightly darker turn" here, this is even better than the actual game'... and of course then things promptly fell apart.
First Liara practically mind-rapes Shepard, then Shepard returns the favour physically... "If Liara had shown any form of resistance, Shepard would have stopped right away" - That I doubt... At least she feels some remorse afterwards at "almost forcing herself on Liara", although the fact that she rationalized her actions as "almost" is disturbing.
Nicely done. Build it up and then burn it down.
Can't wait to see what comes next. Please update soon.

WOW, love the story thus far, nice idea, and seeing Shep and Liara already together when ME1 starts is cool )
Hope they'll manage to get through Shepard's problems! Can't wait for the next chapter! And thanks for publishing!

Huh, cliffhangery. Despite all the grammatical weirdness, I actually really enjoyed that, a little disappointed, honestly, that she made Liara cum without the meld, but hey, alright, whatevs. Not a happy camper that this is over for now lol

Can an't wait for more!

Too lazy to sign in sorry lol.

anywho fantastic story! I am just loving the chemistry of Shep and Liara. even if it is a whirlwind romance it's 100% believable with the way that you write it. Can't wait until the next update!

Thanks for the update. I'm glad to have read the continuation of the story.

I am really enjoying this story.

That was a pretty neat birthday present. :)

Lovely. Wish there was a continuation of this but I don't recall seeing one when browsing your story listing earlier. Oh well, a girl can dream... )

"Happy birthday, Shepard.", indeed!

This was such a gorgeous beginning! Makes me wish the other two parts were out already!

But alas, until then I will be sitting here clicking on the refresh icon until I see another posting... lol

Damn! This was really good. A great fanfic man. Well written, though I hope your planning on making a sequel dude. This is a very good fanfic. I see a lot of potential that it could be one of the best Shepra fanfics ever here. Please post more chapters soon. Or even a sequel story if you're making this a oneshot.

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