Reviews for Immortal Elf
Jose19 chapter 1 . 5/10
The biggest problem is not the pairing but immortality that kills any chance for Naruto.
Guest2 chapter 6 . 1/18
Really like it please don't stop
Guest chapter 2 . 1/1
IF WE GIVE THE ELF TOWARDS THE PALACE...seriously work on your grammar get a beta
kidray98624 chapter 6 . 7/19/2019
didn't she get it for free in the anime? i can't really remember
zehendner chapter 6 . 5/28/2019
Soooo I'm going to guess and say your not doing chapters for this story?
Borello chapter 6 . 5/16/2019
damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.
Nikkless chapter 4 . 5/8/2019
the fight could have been written better
Nikkless chapter 4 . 5/8/2019
:/
Nikkless chapter 3 . 5/8/2019
this became wierd fast
Nikkless chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
didint like the god thing that naruto met
Nikkless chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
otherwise content is interesting
Nikkless chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
damn feels like reading from google traslation
Nikkless chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
needs editing
Kitari Ferreira chapter 6 . 12/2/2018
lol the last scene was funny and i really like this fic please continue it this is like the 60th time i came back to read it(after a couple year or month increments but its true) so please do continue this fanfic it is really great
Crusherman5 chapter 6 . 8/20/2018
have you abandoned fanfiction
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