can they even call themselves officers if they insult people just to make someone spill a false truth (ㅁ)

update soon! :3

You know what I feel when I read this story? Anger...
How can he bully my Tsuna like that? Gokudera too! *throwing any thing in my room to author*
Kidding2. But it's really true that I'm angry with that police attitude.
Nice story! Update fast pwease! *puppy eyes*

Who's next? Cant wait for more!

It was a long time before you updated. I'm lad the chapter came out. I find Gokudera as a character written here reasonable however the contrast between the police was too great. Also, if you do need a beta reader for this, I am available. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Really interesting ! Continue please !

These police men have ISSUES! I wanted to box 'em in the face!

If your talking to someone, bringing up their family is just gonna get you a one-way ticket to knock-out-ville. I bet that idiot wont understand that until he finishes with all seven. Ryohei, Takeshi, Mukuro and Kyoyua will give him the beating of a LIFE-TIME! Lambo...I think he might electrocute the man while he punches him...

ps. Is this still connected to the Vongola Decimo, (Mafia) story-line or is it unrelated?

When I was reading this, I was like:
Shut the F*ck Up you Police! You Judgemental People! Go to hell! Rot and die there! On Second thought... Go to All Seven Hells and be Tortured there! Feel the pain! I might have forgiven you if you bad mouthed Hayato, but his Mom? NO. You don't even know her, yet you judge her? You're already a Jugemental Person, A Corrupted Person, and to make things worse, you're a freaking d*utche bag, mor*n, bastard, *ssh*le! ARGH!
Sorry for my foul language, I'm too emotional, and some police this days are like that. Bringers of Justice? When? Where? How? Their even injustice themselves, always getting cocky. Those Selfish B*stards...
Anyway, I hope you'll update soon! (I'm really, really sorry for my foul language.. TT)

Namimori police- incompetent. They need to get better police.

damn that officer is a ass, but seriously, what's with people and mom's you know there's better ways to insult people... what did the mom ever do to you, anyways, i'm almost willing to bet that the officer might be the killer since he hates teens sooooo much, such an ass, but this story's awesome

Great story. Hope you update soon!
I think the officer is the killer.

Amazing! I think I'm in love! 3

What?! Man, you're right! The officer in this was a jerk! We all know that Gokudera is a HUGE rebel, but those charges are unreasonable! Well, maybe not thievery... Eh, but at least he got away/ is on the run.

Hello there. I actually never read your previous edition of the story, merely giving a look at the summary before heading on to other fanfics. So I decided to take a look at this one... sadly this fanfic is not as interesting as I thought it would give me.

First things first, I really hope you had researched on how police investigation goes. If items were missing, the homes of the suspects would be searched through, weren't they? Or whether they would be pawned to shops for the money, etc. Next thing, I'm one hundred percent sure that people are to keep their personal feelings to themselves when at work. These people would have been fired or taken from the case if they did not. Dramas might fail me, but I'm sure there is some recording of what had happened in this chapter. As known as, surveillance so that they can watch the reactions of the person.

The hate the police officer gave Tsuna is extremely uncalled for. He has no evidence and he cannot be so judgemental. I hope you weren't making him so stupid and messed up just to make Tsuna more pitiful. This conduct wouldn't be condoned, especially when it comes to insulting the person. The police officers know they aren't the judge in court, all the more the reason why this fanfic fails at being realistic. If Tsuna raped her, they would have at least bothered checking whether he did or not instead of making baseless conclusions. And please don't give me the excuse that 'police is corrupt' because that kind of behaviour or procedures is freaking asking to be fired.

Another minor issue is the grammatical and typo errors. I suggest you on getting a beta-reader. Some punctuation are missing, and the phrasing does not match. (Were you expecting "like parents like child" to work? No, it feels darn awkward reading it like that because it's grammatically wrong too.) If you wanted to write an actual investigation, write it like one. For example, "they had already spoken against you." would be more along the lines of "their testimonials do not match with yours." Please fix your typos, like how 'motive' became "motif".

I can't compare whether this is better than your previous one, but seeing how this reboot is not starting on a super good start, I really suggest you to proofread your chapters before uploading them because clearly, this shows the lack of effort you have made to make it more presentable or at least believable within our suspension of belief. This is just chapter 1, ya know.

Yours Sincerely,
Kanojo wa Rinko

Good job Gokudera! Now ruuuuuuuuuun!

Yay! 'Dera's here! :DD Who's next; Takeshi? It'd be funny to see a crime being pinned on the cheerful Rain that goes "Maa maa".

And I wouldn't mind being your beta. :)