| Reviews for Davis love story |
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   The foxxx chapter 5 . 7/6/2019 Dasiv turn to see should be DAVIS TURNED to see |
| The foxxx chapter 4 . 7/6/2019 Again work on grammar, and sentence structure. "Do like Davis?", should be "do YOU like Davis?", and "Yes, who give you to me?" Should be "yes, who GAVE you to me?" |
| The foxxx chapter 3 . 7/6/2019 You can't just stack dialogue without indicating who's saying what, also when you stack the dialogue in the manner in which you have it makes it seem like you are trying to pad a character counter. |
| The foxxx chapter 2 . 7/6/2019 Your chapters are too short, more inline was the length of a page than a chapter. A good rule of thumb for chapter length if close to a at least a thousand words. |
| The foxxx chapter 1 . 7/6/2019 This chapter has terrible spelling, and grammar . You need to proofread chapters befor you post them. |
| ponylover2 chapter 4 . 9/14/2017 Do you know when you'll be uploading more chapters soon please I've been reading this story over and over again about 10times and still no updates I have no flames for this story at all just waiting for more chapters |
| ponylover2 chapter 5 . 8/11/2017 More chapters for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted |
| Hounmon chapter 5 . 12/23/2015 Are you gonna update it? Spelling needs to be fixed |
| genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 nice |
| Blobking chapter 5 . 5/8/2014 what happen next chapter? |
| agitofang666 chapter 4 . 4/16/2014 this good me want 2D cookie |
| rei motomiya chapter 5 . 2/23/2014 great,please continue this story |
| PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 5 . 2/7/2014 Davis has got his hands for with 2 jealous female digimon. |
| PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 4 . 2/7/2014 I wish i had a cool digivice like Davis has. A digivice that can turn into any weapon you can think of would be an awesome item to have. |
| PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 3 . 2/7/2014 This was unexpected. It's getting really interesting now. |
