So you have made both Potters wimps for females, fuck that. I'm out

I just came across your story today and love the idea of Harry being the older brother of the Boy Who Lived. I'm also fond of the Harry/Fleur pairing and like the way you flesh out their budding relationship. I'd love to read more of this story, however I fear that after 5 1/2 years that might be too mich to hope for.

Rubbish fiction! Ben is a dim witted boy with huge anger management issues and doesnt seem appreciate one bit whereas harry is a masochistic bastard who doesn't know what he is doing!

YOOOO pls continue this amazing unique story. You have the potential of something special here!

Please continue this.

I've read a lot of fanfics here and while lot of them are just plain silly that I just read to kill time, I occasionlly find compelling fics that have breathtakingly beautiful chapters. Fics like 'The never ending road,' 'blindness,' 'the white road,' 'for the love of magic,' 'the half blood romantic,' etc comes to mind(i really should keep a list :b).

This fic is definitely one of those fics that keeps me concentrating on even the smallest detail. I'm not sure if this is abondoned or not but I want you to know I really enjoyed reading this.

You wrote such an adorable Fleur.

When it comes to fanfic, I usually find myself skimming through chapters. Then I occasionaly come across stories like these which I enjoy reading every sentence thoroughly.

From the summary, it seems this is unfinished and abandoned. But nontheless I'll enjoy what's left of it.

It's a shame that this story hasn't been updated in so long, I would love to read more. Here's to hoping you find the inspiration to continue it some day.

Lovely

You write really well. The mixture between dialoges and inner monologes are perfect and you make the characters belivable

Awesome story! Thanks for sharing!

Give me more

I love your story. Your Harry/Fleur interactions are great, but I really wish you had continued writing the story. Or at least posted a notice saying you are no longer writing this so I wouldn't have gotten invested in a never finished story.

Interesting read. The writing is definitely good and you have some nice ideas. However, with the exception of your dragon scene, your style attributes a little too much 'slice of life' feeling to the story. It is not something necessarily bad, but that depends on what each reader likes.

Good luck if you ever decide to go on with this.