So does that mean you will be doing a sequel? You should. Please.

So... Is that a hook for Goku "into the looking glass" sequel?

I knew Chi-Chi was the white queen! So, nearing to the end are we?

...huh. The earth's version? wow. Never expected that! cool!

So, he's in a coma in the real world?

Haha funny story you have here!

Don't think I would have ever thought of placing Vegeta in wonderland, don't think he'd enjoy it much either.

But that doesn't make the fiction any less hilarious.

I'm curious who plays the Jabberwocky. Cell? Buu? or maybe Frieza?
Short chapter.

Nasty dream.
How would Vegeta's Wonderland end now?

Damn... (First one was my guess for cat was wrong, this time it's because Gohan was the hare) It's not Bluma for Queen of Hearts, now is it? Or, Chi-Chi?
Mad Saiyans, lol

Damn... Where's Gohan? I would like him with Piccolo. Ah, well. Goku have a few screws loose.. LOL!

YIPPEE, it's Piccolo! As for the Cheshire cat, ...Goku?

I THOUGHT SO! I was wondering what abridged!Nappa doing here and you confirmed it! I wonder how many other abridged characters would be here.

Keep going!
I love this! u

Wow.

Just wow.

This story is amazing.

Chapter 1 review-
Well, this was a unique story. Very funny too!