Wow. What an ending. Incredible, I'm still crying (he lost his immortality and magic nooo! he gonna marry Jane yesss! ) Oh wow, that beautifully outlined small description of Heaven... Wow. This was the most magnificent ending to such a glorious series, I'm still sobbing like a newborn baby at the beauty of it all. I LOVED THIS SERIES! Ohmilord it was mind-blowing, elegant, heart-breakingly sad, funny and light at times, full of joy and affection between all three Lokis and Janes. Three different realities, and each one made me more excited, astounded, amazed, happy, and tearful than the last. A billion cheers for the Lokistone saga! Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah! (times one billion) God bless you, Alydia, may you always write like such a genius Master of the Pen! Huzzah!

Omigod I am sobbing my eyes out at the flower messages and omigod he's d-deaad... Wow, I feel like screaming and wailing and flinging myself in a corner forever right now. You are a master puppeteer of sorrow and joy, Ms. Rackham.

No. No no no he can't be dead there are three chapters left omigod no no no ahhh

He forgaaaave! Yes, the boy is finally free! Oh yes yes yes! And now he's Worthy! What gets better than that?! Wow, amazing chapter 8, you capture the emotions so. Wonderfully. Well! Ach this is beautiful!

Oh Loki. Oh poor, dear Loki, sobbing his broken heart out and rambling his sins away with the truth spell. You really know how to make a person cry, Alydia, in a good way, of course, but I'm still crying my eyes out for the poor kid! (weep)

Wow, this change is huge! Having Loki go all traitor Jotun on the Dark World situation is...conflicting, confusing, and supercool! I love how you convey temperature, I really feel cold reading your descriptions of the wind and snow.

Awww "sleep sleep, little one sleep" (weeping with Loki here and pretending I'm not)

I knew I recognized your name! I stumbled across Bauldrs Tears on Amazon recently, which being about Loki, I promptly read.
It struck all of the right notes with the Norse Loki... and managed to have a glittering otherness reminiscent of Patricia Mckillip's fairytales.
But I could not recall where I had read you before...and here you are!
So, I just wanted to applaud both this story and your novel. Kudos!

Lovely!

Just finished reading a second time and loved this story yet again. Please write more Loki.

Awwwwww. I’m glad Jane is giving him a chance. PoorLoki.

Thanks for making me cry.

But, sincerely, Thank you. God’s gift is bright in you.

So lovely!

Bravo once again. You are brilliant, and while that is a wretched six word review, it speaks my entire heart. You. Are. Brilliant! ️

I write FanFic also ,( MAnne or Marti Phillips). You r my hero, biggest my inspiration.! Love your works & follow as as I can. Loved your Lokane stories -& praises be, found another, not easy on . Looking forward to your works, Kudos, Alydia!