I love the slow romantic build up in this story. Cloud and Tifa are very in-character and the lemons are hot! Great job!

Great fic! this was really well written and I really enjoyed it!

Ummm... Like this was hands down freaking amazing?! Writing about each of Cloud's senses being so attuned to Tifa was such a brilliant idea. You did an excellent job in writing this! Thank you so much for sharing!

I hope with the 7 remake, you get inspired to make more stories! Your writing skill is EXCELLENT, one of the best I found on this site and I've been here for at least a decade. You have amazing pacing and character development, the pacing of the emotions feels perfect and not rushed. You also stay true to the characters 100%, I find a lot of writers make the characters a bit OOC to advance the plot but that just wasn't the case with you. I really love your writing and will be following, thank you!

Your writing is very good... I tried my best not to read their steamy coupling but yeah... It was good. And cloud is so cloud. You done well! He lost his memories... He lost people closest to him... He was experimented on... Etc... Of course he has no self esteem and second guesses himself! All very well depicted. Bravo!

You're a very good writer!
Cloud is such a blockhead

This is sooo... enix. Lol. I feel it's very sweet and not totally realistic and that makes it so Final Fantasy. The characters are great.
Finally Cloud has some testosterone going

Hahaha
First time she moaned Cloud, it was candy floss? Next time she was having a great dream... Cloud is so clueless really

Cloud is so CLOUD it is frustrating. But real.

Very nice writing!
But come on cloud, react!

this is one of the best cloti fanfic that I've read so far. i love this!

lol tifa should have taken miss cloud and ride shim penis

Had to re-read this just because of its greatness!

ah.. this chapter was so perfectly and beautifully written. i love it! it's been awhile since i read any of your cloti works and the last time i read it, i was only 17. I'm much older now, and i still love it all the same. in fact i feel like i could relate to it better now than i could before. i really love your portrayal of tifa and cloud here.

i really love the tenderness and intimacy between them even if it was fueled by an alcoholic courage. and the morning after... oh god you portrayed tifa's awkwardness so well, i seriously felt for her. this fic is so seriously underrated, i'm angry on your behalf

so. adorable. freak. i'm getting diabetes right now. especially that bit where he said her hands should stay soft. god fucking damn it. not good for my heart :(