This ending is rushed. What happened to Dumbledore? Or, for that matter, Ron and Hermione? Are they too loyal to Dumbledore to remain Harry's friends?

I think I'd rather move somewhere beautiful than be in the middle of a war; but sometimes those wars catch up to everyone, no matter how picturesque the place you live.

I'm glad he woke up.

I don't understand why Dumbledore is like this. I feel like I need more background information as to why he'd be this evil.

What is that man up to now?

Dumbledore tried to keep Remus from writing Harry? That is suspicious and would have had my hackles raised.

At least Severus was there.

How is Harry not dead yet?

I'm surprised Harry's magic hasn't exploded at his uncle yet.

There are a lot of run-on sentences here.

Poor Harry.

FAN!~

Loved it

great chapter thanks so much for this update congratulations on finishing this story

I like it a lot

Awwwwwwwww. Such a sweet ending to a good story

Please update soon!