Please write more. Also please don't have the twins and Kara be hurt or permanently hurt/ die

Wow, another cliche OC Pureblood rebel who wants out of Pureblood life mainly because of abusive/uncaring relatives. Shocking. So they aspire to be in Gryffindor and act like obnoxious attention seekers. Way too many Fanfiction authors be trolling Sirius Black like that! Also with how one-dimensional, cruel, abusive, and neglectful her father and brother are, you'd think she'd be severely psychologically damaged and untrusting. But she weirdly doesn't seem to care much at all and the second she first stepped on the train, she easily befriended someone within mere minutes. Most abused/neglected children are wary of making friends because of trust issues like I mentioned earlier, and those that do make friends initially have a hard time really connecting unless in some cases said friend also has a difficult past. But anyway. I didn't mean to turn this into a psychology lecture, but if you are going to write a story, at least make your characters realistic. And like I said, the whole "All Purebloods are evil and only care about blood purity and their image and not their own children" thing is cliche and written way too much. I'm disappointed that this turned out to be another one of those stories.

PLEASE. UPDATE THIS STORY! ;-;

Thanks for the update :D

FINALLY THEY ARE TOGETHER! I can't bieve she stuck up for herself and put her wand against riddle's neck. When she turned around I thought he was going to hex her. Her dad dying was absolutely horrible! But also strange since he was perfectly healthy when they saw him last... Step mom prob got him sick on purpose dun dun dun. It was very strange that she was so nasty for
Majority of the times she interacting with her step children but then when their father dies she becomes nice ? Weird. LOVE THIS STORY SO HAPPY I FOUND IT!

Wow :) Really enjoyed reading this :) How you only have 7 reviewers I'll never know...

Wow! I really love this story :D

Love the new chapters I hope you continue with the story!

i just read your whole story (so far) in one day! so amazing! please update soon!

Oh, that's so sweet!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon!

Sorry I didn't read this but how come there are only two reviews? I mean if I was aHarry Potter fan, I would review, review, review! Don't know why this story only has two reviews and 17 chapters! By the way, I love your warrior cat story!

Love it! Please finish it I need to know what happens :)

Good start!