OH how I wish you would continue this!

Uuuum. Exactly how tall are the dolls like knee height or hand size?

ohhhhh! that is so sad... is there a hope for a continuation? please

why the copy paste? of the said dream... but oooohh well... sighed. anyway, i like this chapter. its like a continuation of the said chapters that was not form in makoto's chapter. except the copy paste, but no worries.
also, you are right about Nephrite being jealous when it comes to Jupiter (if you have seen episode 5, crystal, where he thinks merely low of human, and how he tried to brain washed Jupiter that loving someone is foolish, and using motoki to say that he loves her, and how makoto thought of her crush/friend/sempai resembling motoki for a while, (which is impossible that Nephrite knows that in crystal episode only though, i have a say on the manga later on, and unless nephrite was unconsciously following jupiter, because Motoki himself has a gf, and soon to be fiance Reika), and him trying to encourage Jupiter to changes Makoto's mind about loving someone, as he unconsciously want the love of makoto alone for himself. also, since he was possessed in the dark kingdom and is under their spell, that he acts differently towards how he felt about love, the opposite of it actually of his true form that , he does not comfort jupiter with any kind words at all, but instead in reversal of his true self. his feelings is still obvious that he has been following her... and that he feels something for makoto/jupiter, but unlike him, Jadeite has openly admitted it in episode 3, and in the manga, while Nephrite shows it in another way, he did possessed the body of Motoki,like in sailor moon crystal episode 4, where he let his shadow puppet to possessed princess D. and so meaning, he used motoki, it was Nephrit all along seducing Makoto in the manga, and where in the new crystal, he lets his shadow to control the mannequin, and possessed motoki.
also, where he could not accept it from his mind, when his heart says the opposite that he feels something for jupiter when he recalls that look. either in the manga, crystal. when you think about it, and analyzed it.
by the way, he has a tendency to strike that manager, i believed that he could have punched him. due to how naoko describe nephrite.

okay! i love this chapter. and i do agree that nephrite is actually head over heels to makoto/jupiter. that's why he unconsciously took her as the only female. while he only targeted the males, and the grooms.

i don't like how jupiter was portrayed in this story with that manager, and i don't like that Nephrite is the only guy whom everyone is being admired by the other girls, when all the shitennou are also strikingly handsome, i also don't like the fact that in the previous chapter that Jupiter and nephrites chapter are so little. or that the other three senshi has a much larger chapters. but since this is made like back in 2002-2005... i am thinking if i even write this down... but yes, i think i will. i happened to be a new Jupiter/nephrite fan... but been a fan of jupiter for such a long time since 93-99?. but back to anime just this 2012, due to a friend who influenced me to get back into this. who also happens to quit in the same year as i am before. first of all. actually, Nephrite is really drawn to jupiter. in the manga, crystal anime. also, i understand that the personality of nephrite in here is being used in the old sailor moon. not from the manga, or the crystal just this 2013? or was that 2014 when they released it, anyway, yeaH, the personality, his attacks, as in literal attacks differs from the original manga. he also is not a ladies man in the original, as he just don't give a f to anyone but jupiter, when he possessed the body of motoki in the manga to seduced jupiter, and in the crystal anime where he controls the mannequin to take jupiter as the only female targeted despite he only took grooms and males. he also is trying to deny that he felt something for jupiter, as his mind is battling and denying it, due to being possessed and is under the dark kingdom- their original self is not applicable, due to if kunzite is the knight of purity, how can they have a pure heart while being under the dark kingdom. as to why he is denying about love, when suddenly he feels it when he recalls jupiter. he is deeply drawn to her unconsciously, and he still loves her unconsciously, and was following her unconsciously... in the manga, and in the crystal anime is concern.. i have written a analyze blog for that. ... i do understand though if you like the three shitennou/senshi more. i do appreciate it anyway for giving a time to write a story for jUPiter.

that was a very long chapter for ami/zoi... but i kind of skipped a lot of paragraph, sorry about that. i am more into jupiter/neph... although i don't mind it if the chapters are shorter to the other senshi. but i think i know now who your favorite senshi/shitennou are.

why is there no scene for Jupiter and neph like the other two? but oh well...

i wish Makoto's doll also blushed though... damn since this story was made a long time ago, i only saw this story from someone who is a writer. i love zoi and kunzite doll, ahahha the way they blushed, closed their eyes, and do a scowling face... but of course i love jupiter/neph,

i love all the dolls... i love how mako chan hold her doll... and gosh! that was really funny, when Minako did that to her doll... hahaha poor kunzite. the dolls eyebrows turns into a scowl... hahah i love that. that is so cute.

I love your story and can't wait fir its ending I just hope that you become inspired again to finish. The problem with humans we get bored and forgetful easily.

I guess since it's been eight years there is no hope for an update ever but I really enjoyed reading what you wrote and I am kinda sad it is a story that will never have an ending!

Hey! Just read your story and I really, really really love it! Is there any chance of it being updated again? Please? It's awesome!

I don't know of you still remember this story but please update and complete it? Thanks!

This is insanely cute. Apparently I've already reviewed this according to , but to hell with their system.

I love the variations on the lives on the Shitennou and the Senshi. Especially all the different meetings and reactions. Very awesome.

No worries about the taking a long time thing, all authors go through it. We'll just be happy if/when you do update

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Through Darkness and Light /x\