please update soon, I really like this story

You should tern this into a klaud x allen fanfiction

so good. i hope allen stays in control

Hey. Love the story so far. Maybe for a major plot is that the Noah wants Allen cause they think that his got the heart of innocence or maybe something to do with Apocryphos and him tracking Allen down because he may have the heart if the innocence.

During the plot maybe Allan gets captured and encounters lavi (because lavi and bookman or 'imprisoned' by the Noah)

Maybe Allen falls into a coma and is fighting to stay in control of his mind as nea comes out. You can even bring a oc chacacter in.

Hope you start writing soon! Good luck

Please more chapters

I love this story, its like cross x allen. 333 **

I would love if u put a bit Tyki x Allen. :3

Okay. Just let me say, I read this way back in December but list it, and I thought if it like a week ago, and I was like, "ya know what, I wanna find it again and reread it," BUT I COULDNT FIND IT! And I was soooo sad, and I got on today, and there it was! And I was so happy because I love the way this is going! I adore parental Cross cause it's just SOOO cute! So, just, thank you! And keep it up! u 33

me needs more xDDD

So will Alma Karma come back? Like be alive again?
Will Allen and Kanda be there to fight with Alma?

L:Am i the only one who wants to falcon kick Mana in the face
J:No the feeling is mutual.

I just got back into the -Man fandom and I have to say this was a brilliant story to start with. I hate that the manga killed off Cross and the number of well written stories with him as more than a supporting character is abysmal. The character development is very well done so far and I am thoroughly enjoying myself while reading and can not wait for chapter twelve. I looked at your profile and saw that you have a good track record when it comes to finishing stories and hope this is no exception. Keep up the fantastic work!

I love this story sooooo much. It is ABSOLUTELY fantastic. The relationship between Cross and Allen is so cute and sweet. I really hope to see more! Please update soon!

More chapters please!

Holy crap, I was just reading your AN again and noticed you mentioned me! XD Yeah, I know A Year is currently unfinished, but as thinfs currently stand I am computerless and cannot update, unfortunately :( This is a great story you have here though, I can't wait for chapter 12!

Aww I am loving this story. I hated the fact that Cross died so reading this story really makes me happy. Can't wait for more and love the way you portrayed Cross. Still the same yet starting to show that he cares. Keep it up. Hope to see more :)