Reviews for Halo Reach: An Unexpected Alliance
Jtf0012 chapter 20 . 5/27
hey Christian. me and my editing group would like to know if you have looked at how the story has turned out lately? if you have please pm me so i can let my team know what you think of how we are doing.
Thank and i hope you are staying safe.
Goughnat32 chapter 42 . 5/14
I know what it’s like man I was 14 when I started first reading this story of yours man and now I am 20, time slips away man but always take time for those around you man. No body knows what they have until it is to late, I hope you are fairy well with this virus man and I do hope you continue this story one day man cause I care man I truly do I have been waiting a while, but real life has it’s troubles man and you have to finish college and establish your life man. It’s just I can’t belive it’s been this long and... nothing more I hope you have the inspiration to finish this app be man cause it is one hell of a story man. Thank you so much.
King Vader 66 chapter 1 . 4/18
The covenant are Genocideal religious zealots so yeah I don't think that will change the war at all. but hey it was a good read.
Boi chapter 42 . 3/19
Why please give us more
Guest chapter 42 . 2/11
men you are amaising i love your histories especialy this one do your best
Sanguinem Corvus chapter 41 . 2/1
Hey there SanCor here.

Just wanted to leave a thank you note with a question and few remarks in it.

Definitely liking your story so far, I've been getting up to speed in the last 3 weeks with what's going on. I appreciate the moments Six and Shress share and how they go about their new and unorthodox relationship.

The question I want to ask is why you portrayed Six as if he didn't know what the Prophets looked like, despite having fought against Regret and his Elite guards with Master Chief in a previous chapter, before they were detained by the Gravemind? In that chapter Regret was even crushed by his own floating throne. Wanted to point out this part that didn't match with what was already written.

I apologize if this seems rude or insulting but your grammar can be improved as well. I don't want to come off as nitpicking but it's the only major drawback of this story to me.

It's the 1st ever Halo story I've read with a SPARTAN MC that's also growing in a romantic sense, if I'm saying that accurately. What this means to me is that, though Six doesn't realize or vocalize it, he's becoming more than just the weapon he was designed and made to be.

Like Captain Lasky said, soldiers are people too.

That's all from me, thank you for your time and have a nice day further.

SanCor
John Storm chapter 42 . 12/17/2019
Sorry to see that this story is ending of up for adoption, it truly was one of my favorites. I do understand the reasons behind it very well. Hopefully someone or you finish it someday

I will say this, I'm excited to see what you can do with Skyrim

I wish ya the best of luck in the future and God bless
williamcll chapter 2 . 12/15/2019
"six barley heard it"
Spelling error.
CT-117 chapter 42 . 12/6/2019
Hey there, it's me CT, I can say the same for me as I am busy with college and along with other stuff so I haven't been updating my fanfic as well and writing another fanfic is also on hiatus.

But I am glad seeing an update from you has made me glad that your still alive and well hope that you will come back to Balto Cursed Soldier. Hopefully you are doing well in college.
knightofthewintermoon chapter 42 . 12/5/2019
So did someone adopt it?
Guest chapter 42 . 12/2/2019
As someone whos been with your stories since the first posting of this in 2013 I for one thank you as you were the first author I favorited on this site. I get it when the time comes you have to move on to other things in life so thank you for making it this far and providing fun reads. I wish you luck in life and thank you again for the kick ass fics you created over the 4-6 six years.

P.S ill be starting to put more effort as well into my own stories that have been bouncing around in my skull heh wish me luck good sir and again thank you!
Epic roleplayer chapter 42 . 12/1/2019
Hot
Guest chapter 42 . 11/28/2019
It was good hearing from you and I just want to say thank you for this great story and I wish you great things for your career I know things can get complicated especially when it comes to writing but from I can tell from your previous works I see a lot of potential. With love.
TehAngryXeno chapter 42 . 11/28/2019
Well dang
Soul of Horus chapter 10 . 11/19/2019
I can imagine your inbox getting full of these and I say this is well written. The slow burn from Enemies to Friends to Lovers (I presume) is well done so far. You're making me jealous lmao.

Only this far in and I wonder what else you have in store.
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