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   ranjira1988 chapter 1 . 3/3 heh cute... |
| Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 1/18 And thus, the Lancaster seed was planted! That was adorable :D |
| IROCK108 chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 noice. |
| Rakkis3059 chapter 1 . 2/26/2018 Well that was cute and fun. Thanks for this little bit of fluffy goodness |
| WhyIsThisAThing chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 "Like the angles had taken form into food and begged to be eaten." 34 Degree angles are my favorite |
| Gehatik chapter 1 . 3/25/2017 Your headcannon is at least partially right. The remix of the theme songs used in the Yellow trailer are actually being played in the club. And Ruby is listening to "This will be the day" through her headphones in the first episode. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 Jesus loves you so so so so so so so so much and thinks your all so so so amazing and wants to help you and come into your life and WILL if you ask and repent out loud watch Todd White or Heidi baker on youtube they are funny and amazing JESSE DUPLANTIS too if you do not like them then shut it off and forget about them forever. |
| GrimmSituation chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Well, I'll admit, the lowkey Red vs Blue got me laughing and, play splitting quite a lot, I'd like to see a second chapter because of these two, preferably, if you can somehow add the whole team sneaking, and eavesdropping on the date, plus, good job on making me laugh, that's a key factor when writing these two, slapstick, nerdy, dorky comedy, |
| scottusa1 chapter 1 . 12/11/2016 What a fun little story. Have a good one. Laters. |
| Darty 794 chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 "so she snuck in too try a cupcake..." To is short for towards. Too means also. Two is a number. "Like the angles had taken..." Look, it's the physical embodiment of an acute angle! Oh, and there's the obtuse one! 'That's a right angle, you moron!' Crap. "Well, what do hear?" Yes! Am curious! I get it! Jaune likes RvB because he's the creator! Very clever. "Because that's probably listens to all the time clubs." What? "Whelp, down to the last one." Welp is slang for 'Well...'. Whelp is an adolescent, usually of a pack animal. "He was now laying on the seat of bench..." Continue, I'm on edge of seat. Not a bad fic, but it could use a touch-up, grammatically speaking. Also, the ending seemed a little rushed. Keep up the good work! |
| Smithrooks chapter 1 . 12/26/2015 This is a great little one-shot! You made the interactions between Jaune and Ruby seem really natural; I also like the references to RvB and the soundtrack! |
| Jwake chapter 1 . 6/1/2015 Very amusing read, loved the humor. |
| ALLAHUAKBA911 chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 CONTINUE THIS! |
| ArcherShirou chapter 1 . 3/16/2015 very good. |
| Suna No Ken chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 This is too awesome! I love it I love how this was written! I love how cute they sound and how well everything seemed to go for them! Great story! Please please please please please PLEASE write another chapter! I would totally love one, as would many other people I'm sure! Either way, keep up all the good work! Suna No Ken |
