I really love your details, creativity, and you portrayed both characters WONDERFULLY. So much depth in your words; so many extremely insightful realizations about the Doctor & River's relationship and about love and life in general. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and thank you for taking the time to write it! I'm accepting this as Canon XD
P.S. Did you both realize you wrote the plot twist of the a Doctor being blind way before the BBC did in this latest season?! SO CLEVER!

This was lovely, a really engaging read from start to finish. The characterization was spot on, the story was tight and it just made me love these two more.
It honestly deserves more reviews than it got! Excellent job.

I'm loving the mystery!
This River is very young and she doesn't seemed to have done the Pandorica just yet... Oh, poor thing! It's her first time with a Doctor that doesn't know her completely
On a different note, I wonder what kind of vehicle little Melody stole to get from Florida to New York... I'm thinking a bicycle.

That machine, or whatever it is it's really creepy. I knew it was going after the TARDIS and I can't wait to see what for!
I'm loving your characterization of River and the Doctor, specially because this is so early for him, but he's so smitten with River already. Oh, and that River and her tong comment! I've always wondered if she says those things out of pure reflex or if she thinks them trough first.

oooooh, this Doctor is not married yet ;P
Awww, he complimented her. He's set to do everything right, huh? and I love rule 408, and I wish it was true, so he could keep her forever, but alas, that's not going to happend T.T

Oh, just found this story, and I’m already intrigued. There’s no way he’s giving her the sonic screwdriver just yet.
And what is it with the nearly scalding water?

Loved the story! At many points, I caught myself giving this story the OH-CRAP-IT-JUST-GOT-WORSE I usually reserve for the show. This would have made a fantabulous episode.

great story! I look forward to reading more of the Doctor's and River's adventures :) Thanks!

I am a big River Song/11th doctor shipper and I'm always searching for well written stories where the characters from the show are captured properly. There were things that happened with these two characters that we didn't see on the show. That is why I loved this story, it portrays the characters perfectly and it is something that you could imagine happening on the show. I will be searching for more stories by this author. Well worth the read.

This story should be canon. It was thrilling! I hope you plan on writing together again.

well done

Thank you for a great read! Such a well-rounded story, with good writing, great characterization, and a fun adventure to boot!

Im sad this little story is over so soon, you know you've found a wonderful writing team and a fantastic story when you completely stop watching an episode of Doctor Who to read a fanfic. This has been one of the most amazingly engaging stories about the Doctor and River I have ever come across, and I truely hope to see more of them from the both of you. This is the kind of story about this pairing I have been hoping to find and you have delivered beautifully.

Thank you so much for this wonderful adventure, I seriously hope to see more of them soon!

So I just found your story and have been completely riveted by it for the past 11 chapters, wonderfully written with all the flare frolicking fun flirtiness of a proper Doctor who episode I cannot wait for another chapter! I hope you have other Doctor/River stories because if this one is anything to go by I am going to be following your work very eagerly.

Wow a really great story, you had me at the edge of my seat a few times so far, including the cliffhanger of this chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Keep up the great work