Loved it

I love the way that you ended it. Char finally got her happiness.

Best couple ever

Where’s the epilogue at?

I'd like your balls. XD

love it

Sin duda alguna el mejor
Fanfic que he leído
Todo era bueno la trama los personajes y las
Situaciones

Loved the story. Also agree with everyone that Charlotte is "best girl" for Ichika. One of my favorite IS Fanfic and it's a seasonal(?) story(happened during Christmas). :D

Though i wish we knew what happened when they both woke up when they got caught. I can't imagine how the conversation would go, so i'm curious as to how'd it went. xD

Charlotte and Ichika! My favourite pairing and this more than did it justice.
Absolutely beautiful and I hope to see more!

Great job balancing the physical and emotional side of things. The best way to bring out the best of love and lust is to place them right together. Well played

Poor Laura Bedewing tho... She died D:

This was just beautiful :3

And I am sorrynotsorry but having Big Sis not only tell you to nut up or shut up BUT overhear you nutting up your gf is too funny XD I loved how in the actual series, she even admitted she was worried about his denseness XD

And all of Charlotte's perverted fantasies came true that Christmas morning (I'd make a Gritch's heart joke but that is going too far for a review XD)

Sweet and heart-warming.

Loved it.

Oh. My. God. That was beautiful. I had to punch my wall to feel manly again.

That was really good. but I kind wanted to see their wedding and the girls as Charlotte's bridesmaids. Other then that, that was a really good story.