Reviews for A Brighter Dream |
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Jasmine chapter 9 . 1/19 PLS CONTINUE THIS STORY! |
Dj182 chapter 9 . 4/4/2017 I really liked this story. Its a shame it appears to be abandoned. I hope I'm wrong Either way it was a good story |
Ranch Sauce Minak chapter 9 . 8/7/2015 I love this! Please update soon. |
NarfoOnTheNet chapter 8 . 2/8/2015 I just finished reading this. This chapter -8- is my favorite. Hands down. And I like the way you stretched out Ruby's and Blake's romance over the course of their time at Beacon. I believe in true love, but not in true love at first sight. If there was a chance for Ruby and Blake to be a thing in the series, I'd want it to follow your example. I also liked how you staggered it, jumping between the three years from chapter to chapter. Made for an interesting read. I do hope you come back to this with a new chapter, or a conclusion - a happy one, please. |
DarkValkyr143 chapter 1 . 1/17/2015 I really love this story |
DarkValkyr143 chapter 9 . 1/17/2015 I really love this story can you please continue it? |
shinobi201 chapter 9 . 12/7/2014 Well, where to begin... I know! So, first all - I really like that you have this being a relationship that develops over years. I know it's possible to have those "love at first sight" kind of deals or otherwise quick developments of a relationship, but I appreciate the slow change you paint in Blake from reluctant tolerance, to accepting friendship, and then love. And even then, you don't have it develop quickly. I like your portrayal of the two as well, I could definitely see Ruby being the kind to persist like that. All in all, it's a nice work. I can't wait to see what else you come up with for it. |
YourFudge chapter 9 . 12/2/2014 hey im liking this story I like how u go from year 1 to year 3 to year 2 its really cool nd if u can, can u inbox me if your still writing for this? or are u done? good job tho :) |
Natural Born Flamer chapter 9 . 11/27/2014 That's right this a cute chapter... really cute So what's going to happen between the two lovebird? I wonder how Weiss would feel or think about Ruby and Blake are getting closer and stuff? Can't wait to see the next absolutely cute chapter. |
Natural Born Flamer chapter 8 . 11/27/2014 Cute as always, btw what mission they've done it is? |
Natural Born Flamer chapter 7 . 11/3/2014 Oh f*ck, they are really cute |
Natural Born Flamer chapter 3 . 10/26/2014 Aww they're so cute |
Jozern chapter 8 . 8/21/2014 Sadness. Was fun while it lasted. They were good snippets. |
SpeedyNaomi chapter 7 . 5/29/2014 This was nice. It was pleasant to read all of this even though I was constantly going off thinking of my own way for this story to go. Hoping for more from both of your stories! |
LazyKatze chapter 1 . 4/7/2014 "weekly updates" |